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Description:








school girl kinda look
but with fashion twist id say



Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Glowing whitney
byBrinebyElfe
707609

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Black Hair[MT] No Brows!C | Prism Jane Head.
byHairbyMissMayabyEyeCandiFembyQricle
663389499987

Clothes

TopShoes

(ST Old SchoolTD. Black High
byStevenblueraybyTade
686499

Accessories

NecklacesActionsDainty HandsEarringsWayfers Glasse

 Black NecklaceCombo Scaler S95[E] Diamond Blac Balls BlackOwl Glasses Dark
byMarthabyScalerbyExzybyExzybyewu
559419609568666

e.e No eyebrows. And it's noticeable.

The top of the shirt is VERY pixely. At first I thought maybe it was just supposed to be a patterned hem, but I checked the back and it's not the same way - just pixelly in a different way. I really don't like it at all. A cleaner cut looks so much better. Along with that, the texturing on it is rather flat.

I would have liked to see the red worked through the outfit a little more. Red earrings, or a hair accessory. Maybe a ring (your hands and wrists are completely bare so it would have been an easy addition). I also don't like that the necklace is floating - that and the flat texturing on the inverted cross are turning me off of it.

I'd give a grade that allowed a resub, but I really dislike the top on this and as it's a bundle, it just can't be fixed.

B-

o.O lol sin this isn't a bundle, unless you mean a one peice then I get where you are coming from.


While this is nice and I can certaintly tell what you were going for, there are a few problems that should be addressed. The first problem is the avatar you used which is causing her to look very slouched and causing her shoulders to look wacky and kind of pointy, in other words the avatar you chose is just not flattering at all.

The second issue is the cross necklace, the cross idea isn't bad and while the texture is 'ok' the bulkiness of it kind of distrupts the flow of the 'outfit theme' you were going for. Plus with the bulky glasses you have, the cross just seems a little to much and it makes her look a little crowded in the top area.

Third problem are the shoes, I love the style but they are lacking in texture and just plain black making them look flat and boring.

Fourth problem I see here is the hair, the textures not bad but the style doesn't go with this look, this style seems more of a school kid look rather then an adult either playing sexy school girl or that of a high school senior. I think an updo poneytail would have helped this outfit a bit.

The fifth problem is the lack of red accessories, there is just to much black and not enough red to give it a nice color balance.

The sixth issue is the lack of eye brows, I could understand not using them if the bangs covered them up but thats not the case here. Im assuming you may just have forgotten them....accidents happen

The seventh and major problem is the outfit itself, theres nothing there. The outfit is horrably choppy and theres no texture to it or the skirt (though the skirt itself is actually ok I would have just like to see some shine or something on it to make it less flat).

I don't really know if this outfit can be saved, I'm sorry hun, but it was definately a nice try. Try again and don't get discouraged, you have the idea you just need to execute it better.







B-

Yes, I was referring to the fact that the top and bottom are one piece.

ah ok xD thats what I though you just confused me a little a bit, lol.

i agree with the above points, but i think this is very fixable o-o top of the shirt doesnt really bother me, the hairstyle needs to be changed doe imo

B+

I'm liking the outfit and the shoes a bit but I don't get the necklace and I don't mind the earrings, the eyebrows aren't that noticeable but you can see it's not there after looking at it for a while. I think the shoes can stay if you want I don't really care for them, I would like to see more red somewhere, I think this hair is fine because adults are wearing this style now "afro puffs". I get what Yuki is saying about the avi though. I think this could be saved with a resub to change and add some things. This is a very nice outfit.

B+

I agree with Wee
The top isnt the best but it isnt absolutely terrible.
There definitely needs to be some brows added
The hair isnt very flattering on this outfit
Necklace is kinda random
This can certainly be fixed

B+

I agree with Lyd.

B+

B+
86.74 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B- : SinHaven  : 1579           |
|          B- : Yukikira  : 1319           |
|          B+ : Weeaboo   : Judge          |
|          B+ : Nerves    : 1776           |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |

Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 84.2 % ( B ) with an average rating weight of 1558.

Resub Granted