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Description: A leatherish look.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Velvet Tall::mai::LizMidday
bySinderellabyMilara
3998612

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Evan BlackNo EyebrowsC | Aqua -glass- Notty Head
byFinebyEyebrowsbyEyeCandiFembyPinkSuga
641669499899

Clothes

Top1 DuplicateShoes

!D! # CL LeatherLeather Blk Penc! DBU Black
byDezzBanksbyleatherbyNobody
653548611

Accessories

New Acces.New Acces.ActionsActionsActionsActions

ICO Dainty Hand A|M Thai NecklacHand Scaler 70%Leg Thigh ScalerShoulder Scaler Small Waist, Cur
byLOLbyAmisharbyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyAnarch
599566399399419698

ActionsActionsCustom Shaped Dainty HandsFacial Jewelry

Sexy ShouldersPINK Pose Pack. perfect thick .Cst: Matte NailFace Light
byimposterbyPagiebyZephyrbyDashingbyZeur
598798665750442

I like how this looks but the shoes kill it. I also wonder if the leg scaler was necessary there's so many.

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So.

I really like the structure of this - the shape of her body looks excellent to me. However.

The head seems too big. When I went to check why, I realized it may very well be because of the sheer number of scalers you have on. You have two shoulder scalers, and then your waist scaler, which also effects the size of the torso and shoulders. A single 90% scaler is usually enough, unless there's something off about the size of the head.

Let the mob light their torches, but...I've never been a fan of Fine's hair textures. It looks flat, especially as you start to zoom out. Even with black hair, there should be enough definition that you can tell it's not just a sheet being draped from the top of the head.

I really love her face. I think she's got a lovely look about her. Looks almost Native American, to me; she's just stunning.

I feel like the texturing on the top and bottoms isn't the greatest. The skirt is quite bad, but the top is...well, I don't know if you noticed the breasts and maybe thought the hair would cover them up. It's not a flattering mesh. I tried with multiple avis, just to make sure, and it is, definitely, the mesh. No me gusta.

I wish you would have matched up golds better. The dark tones on the shoes and rings don't go with the light shade of the necklace. This is very minor, but still something to pay attention to. Every dev on IMVU has a different idea of what "gold" looks like, and you want to make sure you're using devs that all think it's about the same color.

I think different shoes would have been nice - ones that weren't so flat. These are pretty much just a straight black, with just a little highlighting right on the heal. I know there straps and it may seem like there's no OPPORTUNITY for texturing, but believe me when I say that there is.

I also think her arms are a wee bit bare. Because it's strapped, there's nothing left on her arms, and I'm missing a bracelet or arm band of some kind.

I really like the BASE of this look - the structure and shape of the outfit, the look of the avi, and the concept are great, but I want to see better execution before I pass.

B

@Sin if you would like to see a better execution a B+ is required I believe.

I understand the necessary grades for resubs. Unfortunately, I have issues with too many of the items in this for a resub to be allowable by my standards - I would want all three items changed, or at least two of them, before I could pass it, and that goes against resub guidelines. My comment was more directed at a reattempt at a later time, possibly a new outfit, or a revamp after (if) the outfit is declined.

I see.

You've got way too many scalers
A simple combo scaler of 90-100-70 is usually enough
All other scalers can be taken off since they give her odd proportions.
I dont mind the top
The skirt is just bad.
The shoes arent great but I'd rather see a new skirt
The hair is kinda flat and boring
I would change it to one with more volume since there's nothing dramatic in the outfit
I think finding a new skirt and working with better accessories + scalers would fix this right up

B+

I agree with Lyd.
Remember to take off pose packs and the face light as well.

B+

B+
88.67 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : Nerves    : Judge          |
|          B  : SinHaven  : 1579           |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 85 % ( B ) with a rating weight of 1579.

Resub Granted