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Description: I like the top, so I decided to design around it. owo










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Velvet Tall Elana ~ Brawn
bySinderellabyWhiteDiamond
3998444

Head & Face

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s Hex: NikkaMy Brows BlackCocoa Eyes(   ) Jennifer V3 
byHysterischbySinHavenbyRoybyFrightful
6631489499999

Clothes

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!K! Maddie ~Cors+ Apothic Shorts[Night] Corset b
byKiibyVexxenbyNight
730752675

Accessories

!!Music!!BraceletsActionsNecklacesGlovesChokers

[Anry] Stripes U!S Punk Spike BrShoulder Scaler !S Chained Cross.L. Dahrk Rings  Vintage Pearl C
byAnrybySinfullybyScalerbySinfullybyLollirotbyDexy
614675419624665581

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!K! Maddie ~Nail   Allie Drab MU   Allie Pitch Mat
byKiibySinHavenbySinHaven
666691691

Omg, Sin this is hott....How has that corset not been used before!? I love this Sin, shes very gorgeous, you used the right amount of accessories. The shorts do seem a tad strange with this look I will admit that, normally one doesn't wear jeanish looking shorts (part of me can see that they are most likely not jean shorts but are pvc, but theres a bit of texturing to me that kind of resembles jean shorts in the last picture.) I think whats actually throwing me off a tad bit regarding the shorts isn't the texture but rather the 'light' on them. The rest of the outfits black pvc is dark whereas the shorts are lighter and I think thats really whats throwing me off a bit. The face paint is a little strange and I am curious to know what your idea behind that was and if you tried to find a purple or baby blue version of it which would have balanced out the black in that upper area.

All in all this is so beautiful and so well done, my only 'complaint' are the eyes or the face paint, I think that because you used black/grey eyes then either purple or baby blue face paint would have been better but I also know that finding the same face paint in a different color is hard so my suggestion would have been to use baby blue eyes and that would have helped to balance out all off the black and the blue. You have the nails, corset, and two parts of the boots that all have purple but only part of the nails and corset are blue, the rest is as i said either black or purple. So I would have liked to see a bit of blue like the eyes or even light blue eye shadow to help balance everything out.

This is something I would wear in a heart beat, I love everything you used, and while I would like to see a tiny bit more blue in the top area, thats not enough for a minus. x3


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Yuki made a good point about working some blue in somehow, but as is, I also happen to think that it makes a good extra 'pop' of color...so it doesn't particularly bother me.
I don't find the collar necessary with the necklace, and I actually agree that the black stripes across her nose are interesting... in a way that I also question why you added this particular makeup. :q
Aside from those minor details, this is pretty well executed imo.

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1 judge have voted, the judge average was 91.67 % ( A- )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A  : Yukikira : 1319           |
|          A- : iMoo     : Judge          |

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Their grade was 95 % ( A ) with a rating weight of 1319.

I had the most MISERABLE time trying to find a blue color of ANYTHING (nails, accessories, face makeup) that matched the blue of the corset. Everything was either too dark, or too greenish, or too light. And it was so frustrating. e.e

As for the facepaint. The look eventually started to look sort of rave-ish to me? And when I think of a rave, I imagine people that are all done up sort of "out-of-the-box." When the quest for matching blue makeup failed, I started on a quest for something "different," and I always start in my own inventory, because I'm guaranteed to find items that I like in there. This looked fun and funky with the outfit and I decided I want to use it. ^.^'

Thank you for the thoughts, ladies.

Haha. When I saw that shade of blue in the outfit, I honestly cringed a bit. I'm glad you could pull it off, because I'd be tearing my hair out over it.
The makeup makes more sense now that I look at it like that.

Oh, also, Yuki, the eyes aren't black. The look that way in the image, but if you look at the avatar, they're actually brown.

They are? o.0 they look almost black to me but it might be my screen x3 as for what you said about the rave, I can deffinatly see someone wearing this to one.

Finding anything baby blue is a pain in the butt @.e Im surprised you found some that actually looked awesome so kudos! Id have done what Moo said and started ripping out my hair if i had been in your shoes, lol.

XP They is brown, I promise.