July 19, 2015, 1:27 am

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Description: Boho Chic
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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She knows
Aria | Dare - Br
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Brine
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Henna
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690
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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|Carrie 8 Black
No Eyebrows
[MT] Sky.Soho.Ey
KD^LIDA HEAD
by
MrsKitty
by
Bitvisa_disab
by
MissMaya
by
kloudust
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334
499
877
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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! Black Shirt
Nazra Boho Skirt
Whims Kari Sanda
by
Nobody
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ChicSephora
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Whims
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539
664
Accessories
ActionsActions
Actions
Face Paint
Custom Shaped
Bracelets
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Hand Scaler 70%
Shoulder Scaler
Thick Hip Enhan
PP| Wild Eyeline
. glam brow | bl
.: Bracelets Gol
by
Scaler
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Scaler
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Shakobi
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lPartyPoison
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Zephyr
by
Exzy
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631
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Necklaces
Gloves
Earrings
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V Natural Boho N
Black Nails + Ri
��� Boho Chic Earr
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Vesta
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gowns
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Adidaz
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July 19, 2015, 6:14 am
My brightness was only 3 bars low from max and that top looked textureless, on max it still looks matte but I see minor shading. Same for the skirt and the hems of both are really jagged and very unappealing, also the gold on it is very flat - necklace doesnt match anything looks more native here than boho and those are separated by a thin line. The blues in the accessories dont match as well, just look for a feather earring or something that is just metallic rather than one with colour in it. I want a resub changing the skirt and playing around with the accessories or finding more appropriate ones.
B+
B+
July 19, 2015, 8:42 am
This is a good start. I agree with nerves on finding a new skirt. I look past the shirt texture not being great since in a resub 2/3 clothing items have to remain. The gold bracelet is not needed, I'm not sure if it's something you forgot to take of, or.. but you can't see it. Also the eyeliner doesn't fit the head and glitches. It might be the avi, but the shoulders look rather small. I'm also not sure why, but the hands look small as well, it might just be the nails. I hope to see the resub for this. This outfit has potential.
B+
B+
July 19, 2015, 8:53 am
I agree with Nerves. This head/skin combo is pretty but the layerable eyeliner is glitching
B+
B+
July 19, 2015, 11:10 am

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Nerves       : Judge | | B+ : EmeraldLagoon : 1824 | | B+ : Choa         : Judge | | B+ : iMoo         : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1824.
July 21, 2015, 5:28 am

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Description: Boho Chic Resubmission
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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She knows
Aria | Dare - Br
by
Brine
by
Henna
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707
690
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyebrows
Eyes
Head
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|Carrie 8 Black
No Eyebrows
. glam brow | bl
[MT] Sky.Soho.Ey
KD^LIDA HEAD
by
MrsKitty
by
Bitvisa_disab
by
Zephyr
by
MissMaya
by
kloudust
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663
334
665
499
877
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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! Black Shirt
[AB]Miss Black L
| Black Slip On'
by
Nobody
by
Apherblue
by
Pookiez
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633
676
609
Accessories
ScalerScaler
Actions
Earrings
Dainty Hands
Spice Glasses
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Hand Scaler 70%
Shoulder Scaler
Thick Hip Enhan
CS. Fiona Earrin
Try me'
Ancient. Necklac
by
Scaler
by
Scaler
by
Shakobi
by
ChicSephora
by
Toria_disable
by
lDB
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July 21, 2015, 11:52 am
Don't forget, after you post your resub to edit your original post and change the title to "Submission [Resub]
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This looks a lot better. The accessory swap outs are really beautiful.
A

This looks a lot better. The accessory swap outs are really beautiful.
A
July 21, 2015, 11:56 am
I feel like the shoulders are too small. 95% probably would have been better.
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A-