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Description: Original Outfit

I fixed the body proportions, changed the choker to something smaller and removed eyeliner.








Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Africa. adeline | medi
byFamabyZephyr
773444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

[Ella] White KhaNO EYEBROWS. perfect thick e| brown princes. Elle | mh | me
byEliadebyJinxbyZephyrbyElfebyZephyr
665499665444999

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

$ . Cyberbabe+ Shades of Grey.LatexPumpUp}Noi
byNirajabyNirajabyPrivate
664633697

Accessories

RingsRingsScalerDainty HandsFace PaintActions

::s skeleton han/su/ RING SPIERWHand Scaler 65%[Y] Metallic BabV4NY|ALLIE Lips Small Waist, Cur
byStillwaterbysugarysunbyScalerbyYumimebyV4NYbyAnarch
495999399499603698

Chokers

[E]*Thorn Choker
byEpicErin
658

This is already being revamped HERE.

F

Mod edit: You can not give an F because an outfit is already being revamped. If the judges see fit that it needs to fail, then it will, but no F will be given unless a rule is broken and none have been broken. Please reread the judging criteria on how to grade. And because this is a mod edit, you will not edit your post.

The items havent changed much either. The bra is nice and shiny but the straps are tex-ture-less. Too little hands. Shoulder scaler missing. Please read the thread for revamp again. Due to the declined outfit already being revamped and is pending submission no sense in asking for a resub from you or the items will be duped.

B-

Agree with Nerves
You also didnt change much from the original so I'm going to vouch for the other version

B+

I didn't feel the need to change much since the judges really liked the outfit, so I just changed what needed to be changed like the choker and scalers.

This was declined because it failed a rule. You should always look at the judge's comments on the original to ensure you don't make the same mistake the submitter did.

7) Top & bottom clothing products must vary in developers, unless product is a one-piece or submitted as a bundle.

F