August 1, 2015, 3:15 pm
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Description:
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
Brine
Head & Face
Hair
Clothes
Top
Accessories
Rings
August 1, 2015, 3:38 pm
The dots in the makeup are random, this wouldve passed better if you had a coachella thing going on but just for the skin I feel this needs to be changed but thats not my only issue, I'm liking the hair colour against the skin you have but I don't get the red shoes cause nothing else is red even your earring matched the dress but not the shoes and the neck is bare, the bracelet and the ring are too much especially on the same arm. The ring is chunky enough to be by itself and I wish they matched the earrings like it matches the dress if not then just change the earrings to match the rest of the accessories.
B+
B+
August 1, 2015, 5:13 pm
13) You are not allowed to edit your submission once someone has replied, unless you are changing the title only.
F
F
August 1, 2015, 5:20 pm
D+
69.17 %
2 judges have voted, the judge average was 69.17 % ( D+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Nerves   : Judge | | F : Frightful : Judge |
Note: This submission was declined early because it has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com]. You must message staff to be granted a resub.
August 1, 2015, 5:36 pm
You edited your original post and replaced it with a new code which is against the rules
August 1, 2015, 5:39 pm
Yes because i accidentaly had wrong shoes in the code. The outfit as on the pictures is still the same.
August 1, 2015, 5:46 pm
You aren't understanding, you are not allowed to edit your original post after someone has posted unless you are changing the title. You are not allowed to replace the code with a new one because you uploaded the wrong screenies or the wrong shoes, it's against the rules.
August 1, 2015, 8:01 pm
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Description: So i've changed the skin, shoes and the accessories.
Avatars & Skin
Avatar
Head & Face
Hair
Clothes
Top
Accessories
Scaler
August 2, 2015, 7:25 am
I'm not really sure of the shoes on this, they're not really textured and just have gold glitter slapped on to them. The hair is also really casual looking, like she just woke up or plans to spend the day in pajamas, so that conflicts with the heels and dress. The color of the hair is odd in comparison of how tan the skin and dress are. I think this could be improved greatly if you would find some shoes to match the greyish/tan of the dress and find more subtle accessories. I don't think gold was the best color to accessorize with and maybe something more like gunmetal. The dress and face/skin combo is really pretty though, you have a great base to work with.
B+
B+
August 2, 2015, 7:43 am
I agree the hairstyle looks casual but I liked it with the skintone you had before just not the dots on the skin. Now these shoes are very poor quality.
B+
B+
August 2, 2015, 7:50 am
B+
88.33 %
2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Choa  : Judge | | B+ : Nerves : Judge |
Note: This submission was declined early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of approval was 29.93 %.
August 18, 2015, 8:56 am
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Description: Ok, so, another outfit with several dupes on several different shoes i decide to use - haha. But this ones has none, so should be good enough. I was aswell a bit unsure if i should go for white or black shoes, but i think black should do.
I changed almost everything i guess.
-- Shoes, avatar, skin, hair, accessories -- I went for metallic accessories due to the judges suggestions. I hope this outfit should pass your criteria.
Avatars & Skin
Avatar
Head & Face
Hair
Clothes
Top
Accessories
Bracelets
August 18, 2015, 9:10 am
The hair colour is just as difficult to work with as the other one. I'm not sure how the red lips come in, only with the nails and I'm not really feeling the accessories together, with the dress or the black shoes now. Ehhh.
A-
A-
August 18, 2015, 7:09 pm
Im sorry but i think this reached a point where a resub wont help it
The hair style doesnt match the clothing and the color looks odd with the skin tone and the colors of the outfit
The red lips and nails really dont match the outfit at all
The accessories and shoes look to harsh when compared with the simplicity of the dress also
I think if you had stuck to neutral colors and maybe used really pale gold accessories or matte silver that were as simple as possible, this could have worked out
B
The hair style doesnt match the clothing and the color looks odd with the skin tone and the colors of the outfit
The red lips and nails really dont match the outfit at all
The accessories and shoes look to harsh when compared with the simplicity of the dress also
I think if you had stuck to neutral colors and maybe used really pale gold accessories or matte silver that were as simple as possible, this could have worked out
B
August 18, 2015, 10:13 pm
I agree with Lyd.
Despite what was suggested, I don't think you took the right route to fix this up. For example, it was said that the white hair doesn't look right with the dark tone last time, right? But it stuck. The shoes were headed in the right direction last time, but then you went in a completely different direction and used black.
And the max resubs granted is like two. You can do a revamp if you feel up to it.
B
Despite what was suggested, I don't think you took the right route to fix this up. For example, it was said that the white hair doesn't look right with the dark tone last time, right? But it stuck. The shoes were headed in the right direction last time, but then you went in a completely different direction and used black.
And the max resubs granted is like two. You can do a revamp if you feel up to it.
B