August 8, 2015, 12:48 pm
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Description: Ooh, its so long ago since i dressed up an avatar with so pale skin. Im happy with the result. I found first a pair of really blackblack boots, but they had 3 dupes so i went with these which has none, but they are abit more greyblack. Whatcha think?
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August 8, 2015, 1:01 pm
For the most part this is pretty good! There are some issues though. The top and bottom say emo while the shoes say more casual-chic. The glasses give off an urban vibe and the skin and hair feel like something we'd see in a more classy look.
This also fails one of our rules.
7) Top & bottom clothing products must vary in developers, unless product is a one-piece or submitted as a bundle.
I think when you resub this the best route is to change the top to something casual like a baggy shirt or sweater/hoodie that is the same color as the boots. Find a skin with a more neutral color lip and then the hair would probably look fine. I don't think the glasses would really fit with the look anymore though so maybe you can opt to find a black hat or ring.
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This also fails one of our rules.
7) Top & bottom clothing products must vary in developers, unless product is a one-piece or submitted as a bundle.
I think when you resub this the best route is to change the top to something casual like a baggy shirt or sweater/hoodie that is the same color as the boots. Find a skin with a more neutral color lip and then the hair would probably look fine. I don't think the glasses would really fit with the look anymore though so maybe you can opt to find a black hat or ring.
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August 8, 2015, 1:10 pm
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50 %
1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )
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| FÂ : Choa : Judge |
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August 8, 2015, 2:09 pm
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Description: So, ive changed the top, removed the glasses and the bracelet. In addition ive added a necklace for the bare neck. I also changed the skin - changed the red lips with smokey eyes to fit the dark outfit.
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August 8, 2015, 2:49 pm
A+
August 8, 2015, 4:02 pm
Tbh I don't think the boots match the rest of the outfit now. @_@ But this is a great improvement.
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August 13, 2015, 3:04 pm
Much better though I agree about the boots looking a bit odd now
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August 13, 2015, 3:10 pm
A-
92.16 %
2 judges have voted, the judge average was 91.67 % ( A- )
Grading Breakdown:
| A : Tostito  : 871  | | A- : iMoo     : Judge | | A- : LYDIANN16 : Judge |
Note: This submission was approved early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of decline was 6.65 %.
1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 95 % ( A ) with a rating weight of 871.