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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Aika..![F]! Re Make up
byReekbyFear
388609

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

Ginger farisiNo Eyebrows. Perfect Brow |! revisit (brown. allie no lash+
byPjushbyEyebrowsbyZephyrbyawkwardbyZephyr
606669665444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

WTC. Ring Black  Waistedd/Blu Da!Roxie Boots |Bl
byWatchbyEvesbyStella
664554662

Accessories

BraceletsScalerScalerNecklacesFace PaintDainty Hands

Black Diamond BrHand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler Silver chain. allie gyaru ma!Hannah Rings + 
bySeireSeraphbyScalerbyScalerbyBelizhabyZephyrbyStella
504399419598581662

Earrings

Amuze Laci Earri
byAmuze
635

hmmm, i really want to like this outfit but something's a bit off about it, first would be the top is pretty textureless, and it makes it almost look lik it's flat chested, and then the skin has the big boob contours and it's kind of a minor thing but it makes a big difference.

then i get to the head/skin/hairstyle/eyes, they just look all funky to me, i can't exactly put my finger on what exactly i dislike about it all, i can say i do like the hair color but the style just isnt working for me here.

the necklace isnt bad, but it's kind of chunky for my liking, and upclose it looks odd XD

i'd like to see this resubbed with a better top and a whole makeover for the neck up x)

B+

Honestly I like this. I agree with Weeaboo about the necklace, but that's it.

A-

Theres nothing wrong about having flatter breasts than the regular is.

What Melly meant is that while your skin gives you the illusion that your avi has larger breasts, your top makes you look flat chested because of the textures on it, which is a little odd. I agree with her on the necklace being too chunky. Something simpler would look better here. The bracelet is way too dressy for this look, again, something simple, like plain silver bangles, would work here. I like the hair color but I'm not a huge fan of the style you chose, maybe something a little different that drew more attention to the face area. I would honestly switch out the top and skin, as well as the accessories in a resub. Just because the top doesn't have much texture.

B+

B+
89.44 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Weeaboo   : Judge          |
|          A- : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |

Resub Granted

Outfit Items: View
Description: (PS! The duplicate wasnt there on my 1st submission)
So, ive changed top and hair. Made the eyebrows black instead of orange, and removed the accessories.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Aika..![F]! Re Make up
byReekbyFear
388609

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

|James 2 DuoNo Eyebrows. perfect thick ! revisit (brown. allie no lash+
byMrsKittybyEyebrowsbyZephyrbyawkwardbyZephyr
663669665444987

Clothes

Top1 DuplicateShoes

'!' Stud Leather Waistedd/Blu Da!Roxie Boots |Bl
byLesbianabyEvesbyStella
695554662

Accessories

ScalerScalerFace PaintDainty Hands

Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler . allie gyaru ma!Hannah Rings + 
byScalerbyScalerbyZephyrbyStella
399419581662

Whoa, this looks like an entirely new submission o_o No complaints

A

kinda wish you had added a bracelet but good improvement

A-

Much better.

A