August 10, 2015, 4:21 pm

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Description: For this look, I wanted to go for a casual yet feminine look for spring/summer. I wanted something to contrast with the mint skirt, but yet wouldn't take away so I decided to go for a nude bag.
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August 10, 2015, 5:14 pm
Cleaned this thread and fixed the title. Please refrain from giving F's for unjust reasons. If you see a title that is wrong, then message a mod and they will fix it.
August 10, 2015, 7:23 pm
This all makes sense minus the bag! It's so innocent and reminds me of spring which is soon approaching?
I just hate the bag with this. Hand scaler also too small try to stay within 70-75% for adult avis 65 and less for smaller petite avi's even children. The avi scaler wasn't necessary either and I get why you used the boob reducer to add into the bundle but there's too many scalers and there's also a head scaler too?. Maybe a combo scaler and the boob reducer wouldve sufficed. Also remember to take off your face light before submitting. Overall you did good I would just like to see a few changes in the bag being gone and maybe more spring looking accessories, the pearls aren't working much here I've seen them being used like this and it's kind of strange to me and their colour is really off-white nearly yellow. Also the glasses could be swapped for a floral crown. I had to view this in the client to make sure the scalers were necessary or not. Head; not needed. Avi; Personal preference but not necessarily needed. Boob reducer; definitely not needed there was barely a change.
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August 10, 2015, 9:04 pm
I fully agree with everything Nerves has said. Super cute look though, I look forward to the resub!
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August 10, 2015, 9:10 pm

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88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Nerves : Judge | | B+ : iMoo  : Judge | | B+ : Choa  : Judge |
August 12, 2015, 5:31 pm

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Description: Resub for my orig outfit! ^^
I tried a combo scaler instead, as well as the personal/unnecessary ones. I also tried a flower crown in place of the glasses as suggested, and switched the necklace with earrings instead.
Hope you like! x
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August 12, 2015, 10:07 pm
Okay this is a bit better but now her neck is bare. I did say to accessorize based on spring or something. Also her hands are bare as well this is too simple now but the proportions are better. Also the earrings werent necessary cause I cant see them on the screenie they blend in with the white background and the hair hides them.
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August 13, 2015, 11:26 am
This is a lot better, try to remember accessories next time and never scale your arms.
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