August 12, 2015, 10:02 am
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Sinderella
Head & Face
Hair: Dahlia Steel
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Bracelets
August 12, 2015, 10:49 am
I feel the hair makes the head to small
the top is glitching pretty bad in the arms
skirt i don't lie the texture it is pretty bad q.q
i like the colors and accessories
B+
the top is glitching pretty bad in the arms
skirt i don't lie the texture it is pretty bad q.q
i like the colors and accessories
B+
August 12, 2015, 10:51 am
I think the clothing itself is fine. Though I don't know about the top against the skin.
The same goes for the hair; the tone looks odd with the skin to me. I think if it was pure white, it'd be okay. And besides that, the style is a bit big, so I agree with Ashlynn there too.
You're going to want to scale your hands to at least 75%, though 70% is ideal. As is, they're looking a bit big.
I'd consider changing the hair and top, or the skin tone..
B+
The same goes for the hair; the tone looks odd with the skin to me. I think if it was pure white, it'd be okay. And besides that, the style is a bit big, so I agree with Ashlynn there too.
You're going to want to scale your hands to at least 75%, though 70% is ideal. As is, they're looking a bit big.
I'd consider changing the hair and top, or the skin tone..
B+
August 12, 2015, 10:53 am
Hello, welcome to Sedulity! This is a great base! I only have a few complaints. You hands should be 70-75% those are too large, also I think more realistic hair colour would come in handy and this top seems more casual compared to the bottom and shoes which are dressy semi-casual. I like the way they're cut though so this is a hard decision but I would like to a more appropriate top and maybe one with the same texture as the bottoms or maybe not OR keep the top and change the shoes to a more flexible style either pointed toe or strappy heel in black. Also I would like to see a better bracelet that's less bulky and out-dated or a ring instead and also better nails.
B+
B+
August 12, 2015, 10:55 am
Please try to explain more in your critiques other than saying what you feel is wrong. Positive critiques help our members as well. And please explain why you don't like things, other than short sentences.
August 12, 2015, 11:00 am
B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Ashlynn : Judge | | B+ : iMoo   : Judge | | B+ : Nerves : Judge |
August 13, 2015, 3:33 pm
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Description: Here is my resub! First I want to thank you for the constructive criticism. I found it most helpful in building this new outfit, and I hope the choices I made satisfy the Sedulity standards. I changed the top and the accessories completely to hopefully better fit the new top, that is totally different from the original in style. She ended up a bit more romantic than I anticipated, but I liked it in the end. The hair got to stay because I personally LOVE the odd factor of it. I know it's not conventional fashion by any stretch of the imagination, but for me fashion is about bending and perhaps even *gasp!* breaking the rules sometimes. White hair on dark skin is gorgeous, but as a roleplayer I've seen my fair share of drows and other avatars of similar style, and I wanted to try something new and exciting for myself as well as for others. This was a challenge, but I hope you find the outfit more acceptable this time around.
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Head & Face
Hair
Clothes
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Dainty Hands
August 17, 2015, 10:46 am
Now your hands are a little small.. xD I think it might be the nails though.
This is better. I can accept the hair color, but I do wish you had looked at other styles.
And I think she could use a bracelet or something to occupy the hands/wrists, but otherwise...good.
A-
This is better. I can accept the hair color, but I do wish you had looked at other styles.
And I think she could use a bracelet or something to occupy the hands/wrists, but otherwise...good.
A-
August 17, 2015, 4:50 pm
This looks better and I agree about the hands, although the top is very bright and metallic, maybe a softer grey with just a bit of metallic would've worked out better. This just puts my focus solely on the top rather than the whole outfit.
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