August 16, 2015, 8:41 am
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Description: I'm not sure where I'll wear this but I like it. Wasn't too sure about the ring but I wasn't finding one I really liked.
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August 16, 2015, 1:09 pm
The hair color you chose doesn't go with the tone of skin you chose. This would be fine if you used natural (black) eyebrows, but you didn't. It throws the look off because the light brown, almost blonde-looking brows just don't match.
The shoes don't match, in color or in style, imo. I'm also not thrilled about the texture on them, or the pants.
And the jacket mesh that you chose is really bulky and makes your shoulders look huge. I actually think this is one of the few times that I would have encouraged the use of a scaler smaller than 90%.
I'd love to see this cleaned up a bit more.
B+
The shoes don't match, in color or in style, imo. I'm also not thrilled about the texture on them, or the pants.
And the jacket mesh that you chose is really bulky and makes your shoulders look huge. I actually think this is one of the few times that I would have encouraged the use of a scaler smaller than 90%.
I'd love to see this cleaned up a bit more.
B+
August 16, 2015, 1:12 pm
I don't really mind the shoulders, but I do agree with everything else Sin pointed out.
B+
B+
August 16, 2015, 1:18 pm
Agreed about the shoes.
I think the spikes at the ankles is good, but ya, the color of the actual platform looks weird.
I also agree with the bulkiness of the jacket.. it really has too much going on imo.
B+
I think the spikes at the ankles is good, but ya, the color of the actual platform looks weird.
I also agree with the bulkiness of the jacket.. it really has too much going on imo.
B+
August 16, 2015, 10:07 pm
I agree the brows have to be darker to match the roots, and the gold on the shoes is off compared to the rest
B+
B+
August 17, 2015, 1:36 pm
I agree with iMoo and Vicissitude. The shoulders seem fine to me.
B+
B+
August 17, 2015, 1:40 pm
B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : SinHaven   : 1725 | | B+ : iMoo       : Judge | | B+ : Vicissitude : 1240 | | B+ : LYDIANN16  : Judge | | B+ : Duyi       : 915  | | B+ : Frightful  : Judge |
Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1293.
August 17, 2015, 5:10 pm
B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : SinHaven   : 1725 | | B+ : iMoo       : Judge | | B+ : Vicissitude : 1240 | | B+ : LYDIANN16  : Judge | | B+ : Duyi       : 915  | | B+ : Frightful  : Judge |
Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1293.
August 17, 2015, 5:50 pm
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Description: Changed the shoes, brows and hair
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August 18, 2015, 7:03 pm
This needs a shoulder scaler
The judges had told you to wear a scaler smaller then 90% since the jacket is bulky and makes your shoulders look bigger than they are and it looks strage proportion wise
Avatars without any scalers have shoulder measure of 100% so not wearing a scaler makes your shoulders even bigger
These shoes do look better, but they're used a lot so be mindful of that in the future regardless of them not having dups
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The judges had told you to wear a scaler smaller then 90% since the jacket is bulky and makes your shoulders look bigger than they are and it looks strage proportion wise
Avatars without any scalers have shoulder measure of 100% so not wearing a scaler makes your shoulders even bigger
These shoes do look better, but they're used a lot so be mindful of that in the future regardless of them not having dups
A-
August 19, 2015, 3:23 am
I don't see any dups on these shoes... 
I do agree about the shoulder scaler. I also think a 110% hip scaler would look nice here but that's personal pref. Overall this looks nice!
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I do agree about the shoulder scaler. I also think a 110% hip scaler would look nice here but that's personal pref. Overall this looks nice!
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