August 27, 2015, 1:30 pm
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CorpseDolly
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Tails
August 28, 2015, 12:41 am
This submission is very cluttered and messy.
Of course the accessories are the issue. There are too many piled on top of her head, and the bracelets look out of place with the rest of them. As well as the outfit itself. Same with the heavy pearl necklace.
I have the same bit of advice on proportions as my last time grading. You don't need the leg width because it's making her legs look blocky and the head scaler isn't really needed. And of course the scaler to lift your avi isn't needed; think of it as a personal item.
As for the head/skin combo itself, I think the head would be fine if you found skin that fit it a little better. I see what you want to do with the dark makeup, but I feel like it's not the best choice as is, and you need to focus on varying in devs as much as possible anyway.
Finally, the shoes are also looking completely random. They're entirely too bright and don't match the clothing. Black flats or something like that would be more understandable imo.
And again, you're going to want to make sure you're using a shadowless room to take the screenies.
15) Shadow-less and tint-less rooms are required when taking *hiresnobg.
F was removed by Implex
Of course the accessories are the issue. There are too many piled on top of her head, and the bracelets look out of place with the rest of them. As well as the outfit itself. Same with the heavy pearl necklace.
I have the same bit of advice on proportions as my last time grading. You don't need the leg width because it's making her legs look blocky and the head scaler isn't really needed. And of course the scaler to lift your avi isn't needed; think of it as a personal item.
As for the head/skin combo itself, I think the head would be fine if you found skin that fit it a little better. I see what you want to do with the dark makeup, but I feel like it's not the best choice as is, and you need to focus on varying in devs as much as possible anyway.
Finally, the shoes are also looking completely random. They're entirely too bright and don't match the clothing. Black flats or something like that would be more understandable imo.
And again, you're going to want to make sure you're using a shadowless room to take the screenies.
15) Shadow-less and tint-less rooms are required when taking *hiresnobg.
F was removed by Implex
August 28, 2015, 6:19 am
The top picture was added by the auto-picture discussed in chit chat so its suppose to be shadowless. I disabled it from the submitter since people dont realize its suppose to be there now.
August 28, 2015, 12:20 pm
B
85 %
2 judges have voted, the judge average was 85 % ( B )
Grading Breakdown:
| B : Frightful : Judge | | B : Ashlynn  : Judge |
Note: This submission was declined early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of approval was 27.18 %.
August 28, 2015, 4:36 pm
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