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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Desiree AvatarNude
bySinderellabyHenna
7498690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Beyonce blac!!!**[S] No Eyebs| Ires Brows {BSilver EyesDione Anyskin He
byJavabysynamonnbyScarlingbyiMoobyCroix
6583456654991097

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

[Night] Lace CroDoll^ LaceLux~ SDoll! Tattoo/Sma
byNightbySexyCDollbySexyCDoll
697698698

Accessories

BraceletsScalerScalerNailsSpice GlassesEarrings

{CT}m. silver brHand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler {SJ} Plain N Sim[Anry] Amarys NeEarrings Lacery
bycatoeyesbyScalerbyScalerbyiSueJanbyAnrybyWhims
774399419664664592

The lace textures don't really match up that well. The bottoms weren't really the best choice for this, I don't see them fitting here. Going barefoot kinda seemed like the lazy option, like you didn't feel like looking for shoes to go with this. The bracelet is also outdated and very chunky looking. The earrings weren't really needed because of the hair, it mostly covers the ears. The eyebrows also sit too low on this head and glitch badly with the eyelashes.

B+

Night usually does better than this. I think the top is a little too bright because I don't see a lot of texture?
I agree with Fright though.

B+

I agree with both. The tattoo feet don't really fit in here and the black nails don't work with this white lace-y outfit.

B

I agree with Frightful. I'm really not sure how to make those bottoms work at all.

B+

B+
87.93 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B  : Tostito   : 1036           |
|          B+ : Choa      : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 85 % ( B ) with a rating weight of 1036.

Resub Granted

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Description: I tried on about 20 tops nothing was working, the bra looked okay with it. This is how I walk around my house usually in some kinda bottoms and bra I like to be comfortable in my own home. I changed the head. I like the earrings cos the pearls match well with the pearls in the necklace and if she looks to the side you can see them better.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Desiree AvatarNude
bySinderellabyHenna
7498690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Beyonce blac!!!**[S] No Eyebs| Ires Brows {BSilver EyesXEE Head
byJavabysynamonnbyScarlingbyiMoobyTIYJA
658345665499987

Clothes

TopBottom1 Duplicate

White BraDoll^ LaceLux~ S! Hollow White
by2G3th3RbySexyCDollbyNobody
698698651

Accessories

ScalerScalerNailsBraceletsSpice GlassesEarrings

Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler {SJ} Plain N SimWhims Brya Bangl[Anry] Amarys NeEarrings Lacery
byScalerbyScalerbyiSueJanbyWhimsbyAnrybyWhims
419448664609664592

Honestly, it seems like you didn't listen to anything the judges said. Yes, we were all over the place with our critiques. But your best option would have been to keep the top and change the pants. The top and shoes are still too bright for the lace on the pants. The accessories don't match. The nails don't match, that was pointed out in your original submission. You were also told not to use the earrings, because of your hair. There was nothing wrong with your original head and skin combo, it was refreshingly unique. You needed to change your eyebrows to ones that sat higher on the head. But you didn't. Now they're sitting too high on her head. Not to mention, this breaks a rule.

19) 2 of the 3 clothing products must remain from original submission.1

And seeing as how long you've been in Sedulity, you should know these rules by now. This is twice you've been failed for breaking the same rule.

F

F
50 %


1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )

Grading Breakdown:

|          F  : Frightful : Judge          |

Note: This submission was declined early because it has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com]. You must message staff to be granted a resub.

I took it where Everyone said the top was more bad, that I should try to find a better top so I tried something lacy to try to make the bottoms work. I guess I just can't make them work. The black on the nails isn't the best but the white worked. I do agree on the shoes was to white, as for changing both I really wasn't thinking about it. I have my days where I don't think very well. Maybe where I was trying to post so many new things in 1 day I will have to go limiting myself after a while I get tired and pretty crappy with dressing them I agree I don't always do my best. I won't break the rule again I will go being more careful. Thanks for your critiques I appreciate them.