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Description: Was trying to make a sorceress dark mage outfit.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Venus Avatar[H] Mode Skin ~I
bySinderellabyHeartagram
8000776

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

GiovalaBloodLiiN No Brows (F. liz brows | bl[H] Blossom Eye [H] Alice MH ~Iv
byAndiebyLiiNbyZephyrbyHeartagrambyHeartagram
6653356804441668

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

V' +Leathers DreDemon Staff.: Nurse PVC Boo
byVkeibyKrombyPlazDoll
2644939698

Accessories

ArmbandsArmbandsScalerNecklacesFace PaintDainty Hands

EV PRoGreZ PVC ADoll! Sacrifice~Combo Scaler S90A| Gothica Neckl[H] Lash + Liner[KISA]HandOverla
byEVbySexyCDollbyScalerbyCroixbyHeartagrambyKisaTheCutie
599675419559599609

I think this is a bit too confusing with the accessories, the nice goth dress and the staff then the shoes. The arm accessory match the shoes and the necklace matches the dress but I think this need a more tight/form fitting pants suit. I'm also not liking the eyes against the skintone looks more like irritation rather than demon eyes and the hair with the eyes seem off.

B+

The hand overlay wasn't necessary.
I kind of agree about around the eyes. The head/skin combo generally makes her look rather young.
The accessories aren't completely terrible, though the necklace does clash with the other ones you chose.
So I agree with Nerves for the most part.

B+

I agree with iMoo. Something you need to remember is that Kisa's hand overlay, only matches her skins. It will not match any other skin. So please stop using it with other skins.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Nerves    : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |

Can I have a resub since roleplay discontinued.

Resub Granted

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Description: There are a lot things I changed.. I replaced the boots, bracelet and armband that isn't looking like as PVC. Also I replaced the necklace to be similar colour into the hair. I chosen a new different skin and head thats look older.. I replaced eyes too. I changed the colour of the hair so it could be match colour as the necklace and the eyebrows from the roots. Oh, I almost forgot to say I changed nails without the overlay!







Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Venus Avatar. witchy mizu | 
bySinderellabyZephyr
8000444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|Giovala Red. liz brows | blmm. Alba Eyes BrKD^XEE HEAD
byMrsKittybyZephyrbyMissMayabykloudust
663680471877

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

V' +Leathers DreDemon StaffLong DimePiece B
byVkeibyKrombyMAHOG4NY
2644939602

Accessories

!!Music!!ArmbandsScalerDainty HandsNecklaces

[Anry] Stripes H(: Twin : Wrist Combo Scaler S90.Cst: Oil Nails.[3D]*Dev* Julia 
byAnrybyPebblesbyScalerbyDashingbyEpic3D
675504448698449

Great improvement, I like this version a lot more.

A

Much better

A