September 11, 2015, 9:23 pm

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Description: Original Outfit: [www.imvuoutfits.com]
I added a bit more to this. Brought in a splash of color with the hair and the lips, and just, in general, tried to doll it up. I also ditched the Night pants that were used, originally. Matching to those PVC stalkings is a nightmare, so I went with a basic pair of shorts w/ stalkings.
So yeah. XP
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September 12, 2015, 9:10 pm
the neck tattoo looks a bit tacky to me, it also seems really out of place in general. i feel like there's too much going on here. a lot of accessories not really a fan of the hair style or the color much, the shoes seem really random, edit: i didnt realize the pants were a seperate piece but i don't really like the style of them either, i think something more bare or thigh highs would of been better, but between the bottoms and shoes i'd probs still change the shoes.
B+
B+
September 13, 2015, 12:45 pm
Nobody posts anything unless it's a grade. If I see otherwise, this thread will be locked until Fright or Choa can deal with it.
September 13, 2015, 12:45 pm
Nobody posts anything unless it's a grade. If I see otherwise, this thread will be locked until Fright or Choa can deal with it.
September 13, 2015, 2:00 pm
Alright, I've read over this thread. I'm locking it for now. Choa and myself will discuss what to do about this.
September 13, 2015, 2:00 pm
Alright, I've read over this thread. I'm locking it for now. Choa and myself will discuss what to do about this.
September 13, 2015, 5:47 pm
Thread clean and sparkly new.
I can agree the accessory use is a bit over the top. Two pairs of earrings was just a little too much. I think you should keep the stud earrings and lose the hoops because the hairband is a really nice main piece to this and the hoop earrings distract it and make it more busy.The bracelet is really nice though, please keep it! I do feel the shoes are random, solely because this does have the punk/goth/spike vibe but not so much punk/goth/bat vibe, if that even makes sense. o3o I do like the tattoo though. It's a clean design and it honestly looks lacy to me more so than tribal.
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I can agree the accessory use is a bit over the top. Two pairs of earrings was just a little too much. I think you should keep the stud earrings and lose the hoops because the hairband is a really nice main piece to this and the hoop earrings distract it and make it more busy.The bracelet is really nice though, please keep it! I do feel the shoes are random, solely because this does have the punk/goth/spike vibe but not so much punk/goth/bat vibe, if that even makes sense. o3o I do like the tattoo though. It's a clean design and it honestly looks lacy to me more so than tribal.
B+
September 13, 2015, 10:50 pm

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Weeaboo : Judge | | B+ : Choa   : Judge | | B+ : iMoo   : Judge |
September 14, 2015, 1:35 pm

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Description: OKAY!
I dropped the hoops and the septum piercing in favor of clearing up the face region a bit. I changed the shoes - the dup is a year old and is actually quite different from this one.
I did decide to keep the tattoo, as well as the studs and bracelet as were recommended.
Tada?
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