September 16, 2015, 4:54 am

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Description: Just a simple summery look
Avatars & Skin
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[SIN] PrettyChic
![F]! Ginger V2
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Sinderella
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SE-Auburn Avril
KD^RED EYEBROWS
[p]Soar.emerald
KD^MYRA HEAD
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ShaynaEnvy
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kloudust
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PetitePoet
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WTC. Storm Dress
Sexy Lady shoes
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Accessories
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Hand Scaler 70%
Shoulder Scaler
[iD] Cher - Nail
*W* Irish Choker
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September 16, 2015, 11:35 am
Simple and summary doesn't really go with gold accessories. What you've got here is a clash of looks. I know that the necklace is pretty and light, but it's not the right kind of light for this look. White or pastel accessories would work best for this.
You do need a bit more to this, I think. I know it's meant to be super simple, but this is too super simple. A bracelet or even just a ring would help to make it feel more complete.
Your eyebrows should be darker - right now, they match the strands of the hair. What you want to do is match eyebrows to the color of the roots of the hair. So, a darker red than what you have now.
I'd like to see this cleaned up.
B+
You do need a bit more to this, I think. I know it's meant to be super simple, but this is too super simple. A bracelet or even just a ring would help to make it feel more complete.
Your eyebrows should be darker - right now, they match the strands of the hair. What you want to do is match eyebrows to the color of the roots of the hair. So, a darker red than what you have now.
I'd like to see this cleaned up.
B+
September 16, 2015, 11:44 am
I agree about the accessories and bareness to the outfit. The roots aren't super dark, but doing a red-brown would look a little better, I think.
These are nice submissions, so with a little bit of work, you'll be getting A's in no time.
B+
These are nice submissions, so with a little bit of work, you'll be getting A's in no time.
B+
September 18, 2015, 6:43 am
I agree about accessories. Would like to see a resub. I'm also seeing that dress mesh a lot through the years.
B+
B+
September 18, 2015, 8:46 am
I agree with iMoo and Sin. The dress mesh is fine, it hasn't been overly used.
B+
B+
September 18, 2015, 8:50 am

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : SinHaven : 1749 | | B+ : iMoo     : Judge | | B+ : Nerves   : Judge | | B+ : Frightful : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1749.