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Description: Going for a "Fourth of July at the beach" sort of look.
Can't decide if I love that skin or if it just weirds me out.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[SIN] Ash Still !F! My Skin [BET
bySinderellabyFear
663609

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Abigail blacKD^BROWN EYEBROW[p]Soar.graveKD^MYRA HEAD
byJavabykloudustbyPetitePoetbykloudust
663499499877

Clothes

TopShoes

!A Summer Days -!A Beach Wedding
byAbsentbyAbsent
650589

Accessories

ActionsScalerScalerNecklacesDainty Hands

A&M Dance *Yes, Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler Wxhelli Shell Beach Nails Nude
byMocapDancerbyScalerbyScalerbyRiaWinxbyLIVIMANDALA
2230419448690697

Your eyebrows need to be darker. As I said on the last post - match eyebrows to the root of the hair, not to the ends of it. You kind of landed somewhere in the middle, in the brown-toned fade. The roots, though, are actually black, so the eyebrows should be black, too.

Again, you're throwing gold into outfits where it really doesn't belong. This is a really casual look (like you said - a beach look), and I don't know anyone that wears gold to the beach. And, even with the necklace, this is under-accessorized. A ring. An anklet. A bracelet. Something needs to add to this a bit more.

B+

Make sure you're leaving off any unnecessary actions, like dances and pose/expression packs.
Agree with Sin otherwise.
I like the shells on the necklace, so finding a similar derive in silver or something could be promising. And as she said, add a bracelet.
The shoes don't feel too beachy or casual for me, maybe find something flatter or more..simple.

B+

That's weird...I noticed the dance on there and re-took the "Products in Scene" page specifically to remove it. I don't know how it still showed up. O.o

I agree and, maybe you didn't click enter? Nice outfit though. Work on it and it'll be really nice.

B+

This is a cute look, I agree with iMoo, this doesn't need much work to fix it

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : SinHaven  : 1749           |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Nerves    : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1749.

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