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Description: A Chibi LSP for all you Adventure Time fans out there~










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

M' Av. Peace cla Video Girl! #02
byM0nysbyArges
499444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

 Mah Lumpin Hair No Brows[H] Miko Brow ~P[H] Blossom Eye  Cutieful Head 
byHairybyBJXbyHeartagrambyHeartagrambyTruly
3081444664444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 Lumpy Space And Lumpy Space Lumpy Space
byHairybyHairybyHairy
719719686

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerScalerAnimated MagicMiscellaneous

Avatar Scaler 67Hand Scaler 60%Butt/Hips ScalerFootScaler No Shadow(n)BS Enhancer C
byScalerbyScalerbyjdadidbyScalerbyYUIbynitewingz
419419686598499609

Dainty HandsVenetian Masqu

+ Plain Dainty H Lumpy Space
byBunnybyHairy
554566

You'll need to edit your title to include the [Bundle] tag after "Awaiting Submission," so that it's graded and entered onto the website appropriately, should it pass.

I don't know how to feel about this outfit. The first thing that jumps out at me is that all of the purples are different, despite being by the same developer. This doesn't really look good, in the long run.

The hair texture is definitely lacking on this - I would have preferred to see something more vivid, and, again, matching the other shades of purple.

The shoulders are too small, and the head too large on this, making for a very off-putting sort of look. Child avatar =/= giant head, even if you say it's "chibi." I just can't approve something with that level of disproportion. On that same note, her hips and but are HUGE making her almost look like she's got a fat but, but the rest of her is tiny. It just isn't working. Too many scalers doing too many different things.

Also, even for a child avatar, this is lacking accessories. There's honestly nothing except for that little star on the forehead.

Definitely needs cleaning up.

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I agree with Sin completely.
The bodyshape chibi product is what makes the hip/butt big like that. Just stick to a scaler that shrinks her to a child size. Probably gonna want the hip scaler removed too. Children don't have much (or any) curve.

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Yes sorry about the bundle part missing from the title, I'll make sure to include it next time.Also thank you for the critique, I've learned quite a lot by just posting three outfitts~ I'll make sure remember it all~

I agree.

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