September 24, 2015, 7:53 am

Outfit Items: View
Description: A kawaii Puppy for those pink lovers out there~
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Av Peace Kawaii
Video Girl! #02
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M0nys
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Arges
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyebrows
Eyes
Head
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Poppy
No Brows
[H] Miko Brow ~S
Dark Doll
! Grace Head
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Hairy
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BJX
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Heartagram
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Eves
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Nexos
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Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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Poppy Andro
Poppy
Poppy
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Hairy
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Hairy
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Accessories
ScalerScaler
Scaler
Dainty Hands
Actions
Elf Ears
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Hand Scaler 60%
Combo Scaler S85
Head Scaler
+ Plain Dainty H
Leg Length 125
Poppy
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Scaler
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Scaler
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Scaler
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Bunny
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Ori
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Hairy
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Tails
Collars
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Poppy
Poppy
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Hairy
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September 24, 2015, 10:46 am
So the idea behind this is completely adorable.
But as for the outfit, I don't understand tying the gym shorts in with girly socks and this particular top. I guess that's the dev's doing though, so can't complain much. >>;
This has the same issues as your last submission. The avi's looking way too thin/stretched. Even out your proportions. 90/95% for shoulders, 100% for arms always, 70/75% for hands. Legs don't need to be longer, and you have two hand scalers on. I think the head would also be fine without the scaler.
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But as for the outfit, I don't understand tying the gym shorts in with girly socks and this particular top. I guess that's the dev's doing though, so can't complain much. >>;
This has the same issues as your last submission. The avi's looking way too thin/stretched. Even out your proportions. 90/95% for shoulders, 100% for arms always, 70/75% for hands. Legs don't need to be longer, and you have two hand scalers on. I think the head would also be fine without the scaler.
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September 25, 2015, 6:12 pm
Welcome to the group and congrats on submitting!
iMoo hit the nail on the head. As a new member will be shaping you up and getting you together so be patient with us and listen to the advice we give and you'll be a pro in no time ^^ The scalers and the stretched avatar seems to be your pain issue. I'd also like to think finding a more suitable bottom by the dev could help too.
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iMoo hit the nail on the head. As a new member will be shaping you up and getting you together so be patient with us and listen to the advice we give and you'll be a pro in no time ^^ The scalers and the stretched avatar seems to be your pain issue. I'd also like to think finding a more suitable bottom by the dev could help too.
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