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I liked this because so much Akatsuki stuff in the catalog is clearly cosplay. It was nice to find something that had the theme but could pass as casual clothing.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[SIN]  Aurora StLate Cherry
bySinderellabyHenna
698690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

! AVIS BRUNETTENO EYEBROWS[p]Soar.graveM| Yoko Azn Lash
byJavabyJinxbyPetitePoetbyChoa
663499499987

Clothes

TopShoes

Akatsuki Dress ~INinja Heels Bla
byShikigamiTensbyIZIS
950829

Accessories

EarringsScalerScalerNailsFace Paint

T' Akatsuki EarrHand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler Nails*MT* D.Brown Bro
byVkeibyScalerbyScalerbyLollipopTrollbyMissMaya
660419448664510

I like how you put this outfit together, however. I feel like, once again, your head is too youthful for this. You REALLY need to start switching things up. You're showing too much leg and cleavage, and wearing too much makeup, for the Yoko head to be appropriate for this look.

This is also under-accessorized with her arms and hands completely bare.

Because it's been said to you so many times, I'm going to grade hard on the head choice from now on. Remember that just because you smear makeup across a little girl's face, it doesn't mean she doesn't look like a little girl, anymore.

B

I did use a different head, it's a Yoko head, and I've never had any complaints about that looking too young before.

You may want to check the AP group (I'd link you, but that's against TOS). You were just recently told in there that the Yoko head was too youthful.

I don't remember seeing it, but regardless, how is it too youthful? The eyes are smaller and elongated like those of an adult, the lips are full and shapely, well proportioned to the face and not round like a child's... I don't get it.

It's really hard to get into the dynamics about what makes a face look more youthful. There's a fair bit of science behind it, at the end of the day. The features are rounder, and more gentle than what we'd expect from an adult head.

I get that you have a preference for these sorts of heads - that much is plain as you rely on Myra, Yoko, and Scarla, which are all considered rather youthful (Scarla less so, depending on how you wear it). But you need to pull away from them if you're going to wear outfits for Sed that are more mature. They do look youthful. They're chibi-ish and cute, and that's not a bad thing, but they don't fit every look, either.

Tbh I think the head/skin combo is fine with this look, but it's the hair that takes away from it. I'd change the style to something with a little less volume.
I also agree that this is under-accessorized.
Fix those two things and I'm sure it'd be passable.

B+

I agree with iMoo about the head/skin combo, a lot of characters in Naruto are young looking so it's understandable that she will be too. I do agree the hair should be changed, this wasn't the best choice. I also agree on the accessories. You could have gone crazy with this.

B+

I'd like to point out that my opinion didn't stem from avi age vs. Naruto fanbase age. It's stemming from the fact that the avatar is wearing a dress that reveals 9/10 of her thigh, and about half of her breasts, which is not something that 13 to 16 year old girls (those who are typically fans of the series) would wear and still be counted as "acceptable." If the dress was more covering, I wouldn't have an issue. But it's not. And I do consider the head as looking more like a teenage look (usually Yoko looks child-like, though, with the skin, it looks more matured).

I actually don't feel the head is that youthful at all. Yoko head is actually one of the more no-kawaii/childlike heads I own. The head does resemble the asian look a bit more and I do know asians tend to be viewed as younger looking so I don't know if that is where you are getting the youthful aspect from.

That being said I do agree the hair is out of place. I would like to see a shoe change as well and for me the lips do not really match so well either. But yes definitely more accessories.

B+

I also think the head looks fine
I see why you went with the wind blown hair since the dress is windblown, but the volume of it kinda throws you off
Also this really is pretty bare
The earrings you added are a much brighter red and stand out a little too much so I d change to darker ones and add a bracelet or rings

B+

i think the head is ok for this, considering this is more or less anime-themed.

i do not find the hair to be all that flattering with this though.

not really finding the shoes all that great either, maybe bare feet or a strappy flat?

B+

B+
87.92 %


5 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B  : SinHaven  : 1757           |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : Choa      : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |
|          B+ : Weeaboo   : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 85 % ( B ) with a rating weight of 1757.

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