Outfit Items: View
Description: All black, like my soul; well... with some blue. Light accessories to remain casual; piercings are life and digging the graveyard soil might be a bad habit.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Edies+ base skin: pal
byGarcia_disablbyElfe
773664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

$ Vomika Navi*W* No Eyebrows*MT* TheLook.Eyee3e Julia Thin N
byEvesbyWhimsbyMissMayabye3e
661361471987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

��� polite as fuck$ Luxe .1! Lili Booties B
byTHCbyEvesbyNobody
631554589

Accessories

New Acces.Facial JewelryFacial JewelryScalerScalerDainty Hands

ICO Dainty Hand F| Hipster Galax. SeptumShoulder Scaler Hands Scaler[bq]Lotus Man/Di
byLOLbyFinnbyHeckbyScalerbyScalerbybaraq
599554609448698774

Hair accesorieFace PaintSpice GlassesSpice GlassesChokers

. add-on black h���Allie Darling L Double Black Pl~My Brows T/ Bla!Yin ~ Yang | Ch
byZephyrbySinHavenbyMuzetbyFE0byStella
565581609884595

Sorry about the smudges. I was* in shop together lol

This is an interesting look. But I feel like you missed the mark on this. The eyebrows are a bit too bushy for this head, I'd like to see something a bit more tame. The eyelashes also weren't made for this head, they were made for Allie. I feel like the face is too crowded with the chin plug and the septum, I'd remove the plug and keep the septum. The choker is kind of out of place here as well. The hands are also really random and don't fit here, neither do the shoes. Your hands are also too small, 70% is the lowest you ever want to go.

B+

I can't seem to find some angry brows that aren't a bit big; not the one cocked either. I kinda wanted her to be fierce.
The eyelashes were my fault x_x I was looking for the same name but I accidently put on the wrong head make up without noticing. As for the face; yea, I can see that. It's just the usual stuff I personally wear ii

I'll keep the hand scaler in mind tho; those are also the ones I just personally use for most things to fit certain 'hand-in-face' avatars

Try Someone for the eyebrows, she has some that kind of arch into an angry pouty look. As for the personal items, if you had used a labret here, the face wouldn't seem so crowded, the plug is just large on this head because it does have a smaller chin area than more mature heads. The hand scalers, every single judge will tell you the same thing, 60% is way too small unless an avatar or mesh is messing with the proportions of the arms and hands.

agreed with chrissie, i also feel like somethings missing waist down? maybe a change in shoe will help?

B+

I agree with both ladies. :L

B+

I'm terrible with scalers, so thank you; literally having to make a notepad about the tips 'cause I'll forget.
+ For the shoes I really wanted to do a combat boot kinda thing but it seemed everyone I used had duplicates and I just got lazy >_>;

As for the brows, I'm heading to Someone's catty on site rn 8] thanks for the tip
By this point, would a resub be in order or should I wait for the grading ;D; I wouldn't mind making the changes lool

You'll have to wait for the other judges and members to grade this. Some might have different opinions than us, so it's best to wait.

Agree with above
I definitely think combat boots would have been better so you just have to keep looking
Those brows are an issue
This will be cool after some tweaks though

B+

B+
88.33 %


4 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : Weeaboo   : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |

Resub Granted

Outfit Items: View
Description: Just a little resub ~ Added some wrist-y stuff; thought it kinda match the boots a bit.
Used Frightfuls eyebrow suggesstion; not really the kind I was going for but the only attitude pair I could find xD Still looks good.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Edies+ base skin: pal
byGarcia_disablbyElfe
773664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

$ Vomika Navi*W* No Eyebrows*MT* TheLook.Eyee3e Julia Thin N
byEvesbyWhimsbyMissMayabye3e
661361471987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

� polite as fuck$ Luxe .1X! Black Combat 
byTHCbyEvesbyChop
631554774

Accessories

New Acces.New Acces.ArmbandsNailsScalerHair accesorie

ICO Dainty Hand + attitude browsPVC Wrist Belts Black Nails Combo Scaler S90. add-on black h
byLOLbySomeonebySirenaRogabyMegalbyScalerbyZephyr
599581608631448565

Facial JewelrySpice GlassesChokersFace Paint

. Septum Double Black Pl(Black Choker)�Julia Darling L
byHeckbyMuzetbyMarthabySinHaven
609609614691

Overall a good improvement, but now you've broken a rule. :c
You have to use shadowless/tintless rooms for submissions.

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