October 2, 2015, 7:32 pm

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Avatars & Skin
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Astoryah Request
winter cold
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Essay
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Head & Face
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F| Lamya Ginger
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[E]*Miana Eyes B
Leigh Head [PL]
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Fine
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Zephyr
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EpicErin
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Sun
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Clothes
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| Sweater | Grey
$ 80's Made Me D
S| Combats White
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Freida
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Irrelevant
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Accessories
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Dainty Hands
Necklaces
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Mermaid Pearl An
Hands Scaler 70%
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Necklace Pearl F
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QuShadowOfDar
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APRoom
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October 2, 2015, 9:49 pm
I totally would have been on board with this look if you would have used different shoes. From the top down, it's like "semi-dressy, semi-dressy, semi-dressy, casual." You know what I'm saying? I think this would look better with some flats or some loafers, or if you like the shoes that much, then replace the dressier jewelry with something a bit more casual.
Also, I know if I don't say something about the pixel-y jeans, then someone else will. I know there aren't any issues like that with Irrelevant's newer products, so just be careful with that next time when choosing from an older selection.
Don't forget to use a shoulder scaler. 95% would probably work. This personally doesn't bother me the way you have it now, but it's kind of a big thing here, so people will deduct from your overall grade most of the time, if you're not careful.
And one last thing â as a general rule of thumb, make sure to match your gold and your silver metal hardware colors. Again, it personally doesn't bother me if they're off, but it's another one of those big things here. I see you have gold and silver mixed in here. Try to stick with just one.
Cute but needs a bit more love.
B+
Also, I know if I don't say something about the pixel-y jeans, then someone else will. I know there aren't any issues like that with Irrelevant's newer products, so just be careful with that next time when choosing from an older selection.
Don't forget to use a shoulder scaler. 95% would probably work. This personally doesn't bother me the way you have it now, but it's kind of a big thing here, so people will deduct from your overall grade most of the time, if you're not careful.
And one last thing â as a general rule of thumb, make sure to match your gold and your silver metal hardware colors. Again, it personally doesn't bother me if they're off, but it's another one of those big things here. I see you have gold and silver mixed in here. Try to stick with just one.
Cute but needs a bit more love.
B+
October 3, 2015, 5:16 am
This looks like a very casual "I have errands to run today" outfit with the messy hair, baggy sweatshirt, and mom jeans. I'm not sure why you threw in dressy jewellery with that.
B+
October 3, 2015, 12:43 pm
I agree with both ladies. The jewelry really doesn't suit this outfit though.
B+
B+
October 3, 2015, 9:22 pm
tbh, my biggest issue is the pants, they just look outdated to me
but i also agree about the other things..
B+

B+
October 4, 2015, 2:00 pm

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Celestialyte : 1401 | | B+ : Wishe       : 1063 | | B+ : iMoo        : Judge | | B+ : Weeaboo     : Judge | | B+ : Frightful   : Judge |
Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1232.