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Ash Avatar
bySinderella
980

Head & Face

HairEyesHeadHead

[B] Purple, L51~K Red Demon EyeF / M Head Scall. liz | mh | fai
byBerlin70byPoisonousKandbyVV1LbyZephyr
998554444999

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TopShoes

~E- Elspeth - PuPVC Leg Wraps
byEllohymbySirenaRoga
664691

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Nails MulticolScalerHornsActionsFace PaintChokers

AXelini Witch/VaHand Scaler 67.5!Exodius Purple !C Shoulder ScalGloss Purple lip~TR~Esmay Rose C
byxelinibyScalerbyDeathEnigmabyCandiDlightbyLizDiBenccibyTigerRains
724419620539664653

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Pk-Mother Nature
byPerfectKhaos
636

Very nice, only gripe is I wish you had chose black or white eyes for this; red looks out of place.

A-

I agree with Someone. The brows are too light for the hair, too.
Really like this otherwise though.

A-

A-
91.67 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 91.67 % ( A- )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : Someone : Judge          |
|          A- : iMoo    : Judge          |

Note: This submission was approved early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of decline was 6.88 %.

I never thought I'd say this, but this feels like too much purple, to me. It's literally everywhere, and I feel like it's too much. Not only that, but the shades don't match. The purple flowers (flowers on a dark witch costume? Really?) are lighter, the lips are darker. The hair is also a different shade.

The staff feels a little out of place- the details are so much lighter than the details on the rest of the outfit.

The hair is glitching with the collar of the dress - this is easily avoidable if you just pay attention to it.

The collar makes the neck area feel WAY too busy. You've already got a high-necked dress with a brooch to fill in that area, and adding more really isn't necessary.

Really could use some work in my opinion.

B

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Graded before I posted, but I'm leaivng my comments here for the benefit of the member.

thank you for the advice.. this is my first trial.. i will do better for next outfit..

good job~~~~~~~~~kipidap