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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Luna Avatar [TalTGM| Faked Facad
bySinderellabythegangstamuf
8000488

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Hermiqia gol[mm]Nautral Dark[M] The Watch: E Amoreh .
byJavabymiamewbyMissMayabyKarmah
661554466870

Clothes

Top7 DuplicatesShoes

Japanese /LightNylaTights|REP$ Dance Queen
byEvesbyLowbyMrsBankHead
554599718

Accessories

Wayfers GlasseEarringsNecklacesScalerScalerSkins & Tattoo

! Wayfarers FBlack Pearl Earr theVintageNecklHand Scaler 82.515% Scaler button: Lip gloss dia
byShadesbyEarringbyLowbyScalerbylH20lbynutsbar
661553599419499640

Dainty HandsEyeLashes

~A: Natural'Nail *MH* Lashes Top
bylllAdrianalllbyWhiteDiamond
669565

I love these shoes. I know they make her feet look like bigger, but it looks the same using them in real. Sorry for duplicates!

I honestly don't even know how these bottoms managed to get 7 duplicates. Ridiculous.
For future reference, you'll want to avoid as many dups as you can. Find similar derives or other black pants.
The shoes are looking really out of place, too. The color and style is random and I don't find them suitable for the top and bottoms.
And the accessories are all random; the necklace feels too bulky and classy for a casual style. I'm not really sure about the pearls either. I'd opt for a smaller necklace and some studs instead.
There's also a trick for getting better looking eyebrows. Use 'no eyebrows' and look at some accessory types. They look more realistic, or at least smoother with better shape.
I don't think the lip gloss was really needed. That shade of pink is unflattering with this imo. I don't think the lashes were necessary either with the glasses if you're going to use them. The hair has a lot of volume and makes me think of a model instead of being casual/laid back for the clothing.

But most importantly, you failed one of Sedulity's rules. You have to use a shadowless room for submissions.

I don't think this outfit is salvageable with the bottoms and shoes being the main issues. But you could certainly look into doing a revamp if you really wanted to use the top and black bottoms.

F

F
50 %


1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )

Grading Breakdown:

|          F  : iMoo : Judge          |

Note: This submission was declined early because it has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com]. You must message staff to be granted a resub.

Welcome back, it's been a long time! A lot's changed since you last submitted. This isn't bad but it needs a bit of work. First of all, your proportions are a bit off, anywhere between 70/100/90 and 75/100/95 are the preferred proportions. Your hands are too big, and you have no shoulder scaler, which makes your head look small. The head and skin combo are really dated, try a Kloudust or Nikka head, there's tons of newer skins that look better. The eyebrows are also really thin here, and don't look that great, Scarling, Milara, Moonrise, Someone, all have newer eyebrows that will look better. Accessory brows are really popular as well. The glasses are really dated as well, and hide her eyes and a lot of her face. The eyelashes weren't needed, they're also really dated. The earrings have little to no texture. The lip gloss wasn't needed, it doesn't fit her head. The necklace also has terrible texture and doesn't fit this look at all. The shoes are really random looking, there's nothing to tie them in here. I'm not really sure why the pants have 7 duplicates, but that's way too many. Try to remember to never go over 3 in your entire outfit. The eyes are also really dated, there's a lot of newer stuff in the catalog. Unfortunately, I don't see a resub helping this because so much would need to be changed, a revamp is your best choice. This also breaks a rule. You failed to use a shadowless room, just go into rooms in shop and search shadowless, I use the ones by Lumina.

F

Resub Granted

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Description: I really wanted to keep the essence of the first outfit, thats why I kept the same top. I also found a newer skin in a similar tone; I changed the hairstyle but kept the same colour and creator. I went for other black pants, with better texture and also ketp the same shoes style, but changed the colour into black to match the outfit better (sorry for duplicates). I changed her head and eyebrows and also renewed her nails. I wanted to keep the simple idea with no earrings this time; with a smaller necklace and with the ring matching the top concept. Now proportions look good and her eyes look better too. Same idea, different execution.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Lea Tall!F! Natural SP
bySinderellabyFear
1433576

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Schelle gold|J| No Eyebrows-A- Brown Eyebro. Lost Soul FMelanie Head w/L
byJavabyJoanxzbyUltrabyAmirebylDB
6613496984661100

Clothes

TopBottom2 Duplicates

Japanese /Lighty.Leather Krexe x' Platforms Bla
byEvesbyYFbyxes
554664609

Accessories

ScalerScalerActionsNailsChokersRings

Shoulder Scaler 15% Scaler buttoHand Resizer{SJ} Storm Troopck.With It ... C(DW) Jacs Ring B
byScalerbylH20lbyScalerbyiSueJanbyChicKlassbyDelureWear
448499698664581598

I like the shirt and pants a lot, im not big on the head and nude lips. Overall though I think the outfit is really nice and I like how the ring matches the type of designs on the top.

A

Also, for future reference you may want to review resub rules you broke 19.

19) 2 of the 3 clothing products must remain from original submission.1

but I will let it slide since you are an old member and may not be use to new rules yet.

I feel like the skin is lacking some texture
The shoes look pretty chunky especially from the front view
2 duplicates on the shoes is passable but there's a lot of other shoes similar to this that don't have duplicates
I do like that the nails balance out the white top though

B+

I think the skin is fine.
The pants are okay texture-wise, but I don't know if I like them here per-se; I feel like I should have suggested jeans or you should have opted for a better textured pair of leggings than the original pants. The entire bottom half of the outfit actually gives me more of an urban vibe, while the rest is like casual / semi-casual.
The shoes still feel random with the outfit imo, even though the color is an improvement..
I also agree with Implex about the nude lip; I think this could have used a splash of color. Preferably red. The pink was simply too bright and didn't look alright with the darker colors going on in the outfit.
Needless to say, I still feel like a resub didn't do enough for this. Even though it was a pretty good improvement if the fact is ignored that a rule was broken in the process.

B