November 15, 2015, 2:04 pm

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Description: After countless days of fashion block, I've come to kind of enjoy this. DON'T YELL AT ME, MOM!
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November 15, 2015, 5:22 pm
To me there's too much white here
maybe if you matched the shoes with the grey in the shirt it would've feel so "overload"
the necklace feels kind of random imo
overall I'm kinda bored with this look and I'm not sure of the overall theme you were going for
B+
maybe if you matched the shoes with the grey in the shirt it would've feel so "overload"
the necklace feels kind of random imo
overall I'm kinda bored with this look and I'm not sure of the overall theme you were going for
B+
November 15, 2015, 5:35 pm
I agree with what's been said, I think the shoes should be black or grey something to bring it back to the top. Necklace is random and kinda blends in, barely noticeable. Try to use more appropriate accessories. This is a nice start and I would like to see a resub with a bit more wowness, maybe changing the features a bit, the eyes seem too light as well but not entirely an issue. All the best. Hands look a bit big? Might be the nail length, if so its fine.
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November 15, 2015, 5:48 pm
I honestly don't think this deserves to fail. It's a cute look, it's very simple but done up well. Every outfit doesn't need to be extravagantly done. I just wished the pants matched the top better, it's not really something to fail over.
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November 15, 2015, 5:50 pm

B+
89.44 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : kimmipanda : Judge | | B+ : Nerves    : Judge | | A- : Frightful : Judge |
November 16, 2015, 6:44 am

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Description: I actually love this eye color with this look.
Changed: eye, shoes and necklace.
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November 16, 2015, 8:35 am
Saying you're bored with a look is kind of rude. And we just passed an all-white outfit to the site a few days ago.
I think you should have just listened to Frightful; the pants remain the problem in this outfit and the rest looked fine imo. If you changed the pants to some a little better for the top, I think you could have managed to make the shoes work with it too.
Now you've got black shoes that stick out like a sore thumb, and white pants that still don't quite look right with the top. :c
I do agree that the eyes are pretty here though, very nice. The accessories are an improvement too, but the hand freckles are completely random. :p
Gonna be honest: I'd rather see the pants fixed. Just switch back to the original shoes.
B+
I think you should have just listened to Frightful; the pants remain the problem in this outfit and the rest looked fine imo. If you changed the pants to some a little better for the top, I think you could have managed to make the shoes work with it too.
Now you've got black shoes that stick out like a sore thumb, and white pants that still don't quite look right with the top. :c
I do agree that the eyes are pretty here though, very nice. The accessories are an improvement too, but the hand freckles are completely random. :p
Gonna be honest: I'd rather see the pants fixed. Just switch back to the original shoes.
B+
November 16, 2015, 9:21 am
I love the eyes more here. I agree about the pants but I would've kept the same kind of shoes??? just change the colour, that's more of what I was hoping for. Agree with iMoo on everything else. :C I think the first one just needed a few tweaks, right now I want the shoes changed to something that doesnt look so dark, the shoes are the thing that needs to be changed. Just bring it back to the top.
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B+
November 16, 2015, 11:48 am
Personally like the shoes in the original entry a lot more. White shoes are more suitable - there's not enough black for the black shoes, here, to be appropriate.
I think that gold accessories in general are just too much - it's a casual outfit, not a formal one, so I think if you switch over to silver, or even something even more simple (black or white accessories with no metallic bits) would be more appropriate for this.
I say go back to the original shoes and just change the pants, and accessories. Nothing else needs to be changed. This is a cute look.
B+
I think that gold accessories in general are just too much - it's a casual outfit, not a formal one, so I think if you switch over to silver, or even something even more simple (black or white accessories with no metallic bits) would be more appropriate for this.
I say go back to the original shoes and just change the pants, and accessories. Nothing else needs to be changed. This is a cute look.
B+
November 16, 2015, 9:55 pm
Sorry my rude statement earlier :/ about the boring-ness
Agree with the above
would change the pants to be a darker shade
and then change the shoes back
B+
Agree with the above
would change the pants to be a darker shade
and then change the shoes back
B+
November 16, 2015, 10:00 pm

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : iMoo      : Judge | | B+ : Nerves    : Judge | | B+ : SinHaven  : 1804 | | B+ : kimmipanda : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1804.
November 19, 2015, 7:55 am
I think this needs to be specified if they change the bottom now and keep the top and new shoes if it goes against the rules of resub when you need to keep 2 original items.