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Description: This look was inspired by finding the beauty in life by having fun










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

TF Model Daria 2! Req. xBunnizex
byTheModelFactobyLee
930480

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

[Anry] Dolly Blo::mai:kyBrows'Truth V4 M/FAthena Head + La
byAnrybyMilarabyDismaybylDB
663693564999

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

!T! Sexy TopLu)MAIA PANTSH! Patricia Shoe
byTUTbyLunaDLuzbyHAIFAsmall_di
499719579

Accessories

GlovesScalerScalerMiscellaneous Facial JewelryFacial Jewelry

[LP] ~~ Dark BluHand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler Teal Jewelry SetJewelry Face GemWhims Septum Pea
byLifePearlybyScalerbyScalerbygownsbyWhimsbyWhims
400419448730691609

Spice Glasses

{T} Irene Purse
byMrT0LERANCE
650

Oh I was bored and tried to make my own version of the outfit, hope you like it! I think a lighter skintone would work better with so much white, also I went for a different head/skin combo (skin with no tats, different lipstick colour - more natural - and more mature head). I put on differente eyes, matching better the jewelry with them. I looked for a better quality jewelry set but I coundt find a different one. I tried new shoes matching the pants design and white/platinum hair.

Safaroba Wrote:
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> Oh I was bored and tried to make my own version of
> the outfit, hope you like it! I think a lighter
> skintone would work better with so much white,
> also I went for a different head/skin combo (skin
> with no tats, different lipstick colour - more
> natural - and more mature head). I put on
> differente eyes, matching better the jewelry with
> them. I looked for a better quality jewelry set
> but I coundt find a different one. I tried new
> shoes matching the pants design and white/platinum
> hair.
>
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Some parts I don't agree with based on it; sound like criticism based on personal preferences. My goal was to submit a new outfit; that would appear to the masses; minor tweaking others will do; in order to fit personal overall style. Other than that; I like your version of this outfit; it fits the fun theme I was going for. Thank you for your overall opinion.

I wish the pants had a little more texture to them - right now they're kind of...meh. I also feel like the whites in the outfit don't quite line up. The top is so bright it almost glows, but the pants are a more "natural" tamed down version of white. The bronze on the shoes also doesn't match the gold in the accessories.

I don't like the skin you chose for this - the lips are a shade of blue that completely clash with the rest of the outfit's accessories, which just throws things off.

The pearls septum that you chose feels out of place, not only because it's the only pearl in the outfit, but because it's accented with a silver septum, and the rest of the jewelry is gold. The face piercings/sequins don't fit the face at all - they lay in weird patterns around the eye, and some even rest on top of the eye.

The eyebrows are the wrong color - the hair you chose has almost a pink tint to it, where as they eyebrows your chose are just a straight, natural blonde color.

This is a minor thing that I wouldn't dock for, but as I'm already saying things, I might as well throw it in there - the fingernails are a bit mismatched in color, too, and the theme doesn't really seem to fit this. I would suggest either white/nude nails, or finding ones that match the blue in the outfit, better.

This is a cute concept, but it needs to be cleaned up.

B

I have to agree with Gemma, The skintone and head are more of a personal preference, but definitely look into a skin with a different lip color. And I'd actually suggest a different hair color as well, the pinky tone to this one just feels kind out of place with this look. But you've improved a lot, so keep trying!

B

B
85 %


1 judge have voted, the judge average was 85 % ( B )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B  : SinHaven  : 1804           |
|          B  : Frightful : Judge          |

Note: This submission was declined early;
Despite having just 1 judge, the probability of approval was 24.72 %.

1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 85 % ( B ) with a rating weight of 1804.

Thank you both I'll keep trying! *group hug*