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Description: This avatar is simple, childish and feminine. This avatar is a pastel child with pure skin and pastel clothing. In this avatar nothing glitches, no hands through clothing, and no cut off accessories. The scalers are meant for a more child and feminine body. Everything in this avatar goes great!










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Av. Sitting cute|J| asian | aegy
byM0nysbyJoanxz
499664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

[Q] Pinku Shta-cEyebrows Black GCool Eyes Blue[E]*Asian H + Wh
byQutebyM0nysbylH20lbyEpicErin
683609444987

Clothes

TopShoes

x Denim jumpsuitx Heart Platform
byM0nysbyM0nys
609585

Accessories

Hair BowsScalerScalerScaler

!$[c] White BowAvatar Scaler 85Leg Thigh ScalerCombo Scaler S85
byCakesbyScalerbyScalerbyScaler
592419419448

Make sure you familiarize yourself with the rules. This qualifies as a bundle, so your title should have the tag in it.
I fixed it for you this time.

I cant see one of your screenies, dunno if its a full body or not. Anyway this is cute but the hair colour is kinda random and the bow is girly as well as the shoes but the outfit is more casual.The hairstyle couldve been more cuter to make the bow and the shoes look less sore to the eye. Not really sold on the denim either but overall not a bad outfit. Would like to see those things changed, the shoes, the bow to a more updated one or opt out, hairstyle and hair colour. Read rules thread too.

Edit: Based on what Moo has stated changing grade from A- to B+

B+

I tried this on in shop and it's full body, but the avi isn't standing. Think about that when you submit; the entire outfit should be visible so everything can be seen on the site. Otherwise your ratings could suffer.

I think the bow is a little dated, and it's grey and darker than the rest of the whites in the outfit. So I think I understand what Nerves is saying.
The shoes themselves are cute, but no child is going to wear platforms like that. I think if you stayed with a more simplistic style, you could pull this off.
She also needs accessories; she's really bare.
Last, trying this on in shop, she's a little too thin. I understand you think the scalers make her more childish, but you need to check on some other child submissions to get a feel for what is passable imo.
I think this needs a little fixing up before it can be passed.

B