November 22, 2015, 1:29 am

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Description: Chic/ Girly
Avatars & Skin
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Jasmine.
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istrawberryki
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$ Kalie Ombre
!!!**[S] No Eyeb
[E]*A Blonde Bro
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wendy -mh
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.Cst: Daisy.
.Cst: Layerable
Vogue .15./P
$ Bab Sk0rt
$ Gianvito Rossi
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Dashing
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Face Paint
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0 Baby Small Han
[MT] Lariat Neck
[MT] Genna Brace
[MT] Genna Brace
Truly Yours. Nai
+ lustre gloss:
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lDB
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Elfe
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November 22, 2015, 1:50 am
You know better than to use items with duplicates; three in a single outfit is pushing it.
Otherwise, the shoulders are broad, so you'll want to use a shoulder scaler. The accessories feel a little over-the-top, especially the necklace. And two bracelets is a little much on top of that.
The purple in the shoes has nothing to tie it in and the gold is more yellow than the accessories. I like the idea of the skirt with this look, but it's really bright and I'm really not sure about it being paired with the top/jacket.
Last thing, but the brows need to be darker to match the roots of your hair.
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Otherwise, the shoulders are broad, so you'll want to use a shoulder scaler. The accessories feel a little over-the-top, especially the necklace. And two bracelets is a little much on top of that.
The purple in the shoes has nothing to tie it in and the gold is more yellow than the accessories. I like the idea of the skirt with this look, but it's really bright and I'm really not sure about it being paired with the top/jacket.
Last thing, but the brows need to be darker to match the roots of your hair.
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November 22, 2015, 9:32 am
I think iMoo pretty much hit the nail on the head with this one. I also, personally, am not digging the jacket that you used - it's very smudgy and not very clear. I don't know if you can lose it and change the shoes (rules are a little hazy when it comes to having four items like this). If you can, I would. If you can't, just change the shoes.
Also remember to remove your pose packs when submitting.
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Also remember to remove your pose packs when submitting.
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