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Description: Ugly Christmas Sweater!










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Yea!F! Ayla
byEssaybyFear
772576

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

|Ulliwala BlackNo Eyebrows. glam brow | bl nacht//Effie V2 N/L N
byMrsKittybyEyebrowsbyZephyrbyElfebyFrightful
663669665499999

Clothes

1 Duplicate4 DuplicatesShoes

!NC Serious Ugly Waistedd/Dark Black Uggs
byNoemiebyEvesbyCookieEvermor
757554674

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerGlovesDainty HandsActions

Leg Thigh ScalerShoulder Scaler Head Scaler 95%! Perfect Hand S[Is] Short Nails Night Light
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyBrookebyIsmenybyOri
419448419385554444

CollarsFacial JewelryFace PaintFace PaintEyeLashes

 Black CollarLigth / Night Fa   Harley Liner IV/Y/ Harley PurplDivine EyeLashes
byEvesbylH20lbySinHavenbyMairobyAngelGabrielH
524495636636631

I don't think the purple lips look right, here. A deep red would have been much better. The purple feels random.

The choker is unnecessary - they make the neck/head region feel too heavy. The cut of the sweater really didn't leave much room for anything else.

When using a still avi, it's important to look out for glitching. In this case, the arm goes right into the stomach, which just looks weird. Look out for that sort of thing in the future.

But the biggest thing here is that four duplicates on a pair of pants is just not okay. Especially a pair of pants like this - just black leather pants. I could have forgiven the one on the sweater, as you wore it a little different. But not the four on the pants. This needs a resub with fewer dups.

B

I agree with SinHaven. This isn't bad for your first submission, just watch out for the duplicates in the future.

B+

I agree with Sin as welll.

B+

^ agreed

B

B+
86.79 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 87.22 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B  : SinHaven   : 1827           |
|          B+ : Frightful  : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo       : Judge          |
|          B  : kimmipanda : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 85 % ( B ) with a rating weight of 1827.

Resub Granted

Please refrain from using ^ while grading submissions.

isn't doing ^ essentially the same as saying "agree w/ >insert username here<" just shorter?

kimmipanda Wrote:
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> isn't doing ^ essentially the same as saying
> "agree w/ >insert username here<" just shorter?


Technically, but typing it out shows that you put some effort into it. I think they just want to keep it looking professional.

I've already mentioned not to use ^ in critiques. It's lazy and unprofessional, as well as rude. It's also rude to ignore the owner when you've been told by numerous past owners not to use ^ in critiques. iMoo and Someone are my mods, they keep order when I'm busy. And one of my mods stepping in and having to repeat something I said already is not a good thing. I'll deal with this when I get home. I don't want tp see anymore posts in this thread unless it's a resub or critiques.