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Description: Hello guys.
Taking heed of your advices and critiques I've made a new outfit.
Took me a while, but I'm happy with the result.
Critiques are more than welcome.
Hope you like it!






Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

. Morgan *avi.02 Gemma Hydrog
byMessiah_disabbyMahogany
799664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Richie Nightno eyebrowsmm. Hazel < EyesVelvet II Head. 
byCohobyeyebrowbyMissMayabylDB
6633474991100

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Owl Hood CamouflBlack Shorts Basicas XL.
byewubyDalessabyExzy
597590668

Accessories

ScalerDainty HandsNew Acces.

Combo Scaler S90.Cst: Oil (short$ Eyebrows.
byScalerbyDashingbyScarlyte
448698776

I'm not really sure about the boots with the top tbh. Idk if it's personal or not, but the top half of this submission gives off a grungy vibe and the boots don't.
It's the same for the bottoms; the style of the underwear is really random and I feel like a more recent pair of bottoms could have been used instead.
I would like to see this fixed up tbh. Though I'm not sure if I'd rather see the shoes or bottoms fixed. :s partly why I had been putting off judging this.

B+

She looks like a stoned or sleepy D:

@Cattire - That is not an appropriate or helpful comment at all - please refrain from making comments unless you're grading, and then limit yourself only to those comments which will be helpful to the member in learning and growing as a member and stylist.

I agree with iMoo, but I would say fix the shoes, given that the bottoms aren't completely visible. But I would say to remember, for future reference, that even if a piece isn't visible, we still expect it to match the rest of the outfit. This includes shoes covered by dresses or long pants, and accessories.

B+

I have to agree with iMoo. And remember, please refrain from inappropriate comments. As well as randomly posting when you aren't grading. Every grade counts, so don't be afraid to add your opinion. And try to remember to be polite towards each other.

B+

Bump

agreed with everyone

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : SinHaven  : 1775           |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : Weeaboo   : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1775.

Resub Granted

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Description:
Resub!
Hope you like it!
-Hair was changed
-Bottoms changed
-Accesories added
-Shoes changed
-Hair changed










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

. Morgan *avi.02 Gemma Hydrog
byMessiah_disabbyMahogany
799664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Bethany NightNO EYEBROWSmm. Hazel < EyesVelvet II Head. 
byCohobyJinxbyMissMayabylDB
6634994991100

Clothes

TopBottom4 Duplicates

Owl Hood Camoufl Trashed - darkDont Be Bitter |
byewubyPsicodelicbylDB
597576685

Accessories

ScalerDainty HandsChokersNew Acces.

Combo Scaler S90.Cst: Oil (short$ Black:Henna:Ch$ OVO Dark Brown
byScalerbyDashingbyAmorebyAmore
448698750697

This is better, but ofc it breaks a rule. You need to change only one product, and the shoes were suggested for that. So go back to the original bottoms.. The shoes also have 4 dups, which is too many for one item. Look at similar derives or find another style.

F