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Description: Morticia Adams
This was my attempt to make the Morticia Adams character from the Adams Family. Not the newer perkier goofy versions, but the more classical devious ones. I think she may be a bit too plump, but we'll see what you guys think. This is actually an older outfit of mine I'm sharing with you guys, I didn't change anything for maybe about a year? I know her lips are too vibrant for the older Morticia Adams theme, but I was pretty much drawn to this skin and head combo. Maybe this outfit would be nice for halloween one year xp I look forward to your critiques!









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[] Suga -Req-![DS] :: MARA |D
byCherryRedbyDarkSacrilege
778599

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

![DS] :: DARK NI*POOF!Invisible ![DS] lEsposa EY::mai::MiaEyes~2![DS] :: MS. HOL
byDarkSacrilegebyFearcebyDarkSacrilegebyMilarabyDarkSacrilege
661359699492750

Clothes

Top1 Duplicate

[Nz] Morticia DrPIX 7" KillaZ Bl
byNeedlzbyMsPixelicious
699798

Accessories

NailsScalerScalerScalerNew Acces.

EV ISiN SharP NaCombo Scaler S90Head Scaler 90%Smaller Waist ScLong Leg Scaler
byEVbyScalerbyScalerbyAnarchbySkins
650448419698709

The head is way too small... I think the leg, arm, and waist scalers aren't really necessary either. The dress mesh or something is making her shoulders large, but it might just be the head throwing me off there too.
Nicely done otherwise. I'd actually like to see this with better proportions so I can give it an A.

B+

I agree with iMoo. Fix your proportions and i'll let this pass.

B+

oki, msg sent, waiting for permission to resubmit this outfit, cause it's ready now.

This is nice but I agree. Lookin forward to the resub!

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo   : Judge          |
|          B+ : Pjush  : Judge          |
|          B+ : Nerves : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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Description: Morticia Addams resub
I took out some scalers, but kept some.
Chose a tall avi to help stretch out her figure and added a long leg scaler 10%. I find these two working together help slim off the curves, and definitely killed off the waist cincher. Couldn't do much about the shoulders protruding though x,x The shoulder scaler is already making the dress clip in that area enough as it is x,x I did remove the head scaler though, and kind of hoped that helped the shoulders. I do like the poses on this avi though, I find all, except for one, really remind me of Morticia's elegance, eventhough it doesn't have any of her trademark poses. I did see some avatars with the right poses, but they had too many other poses that felt just way too perky for what I wanted.

I changed my mind about the nails, I just have a hard time feeling she's the tip that would go for a french white tip, so I went with the classic red.

Trying to get this right, and I'm a little nervous about not being able to resubmit this is it fails too much, so if it does this time too, then I think I'm just going to take out all the resizers, and just keep the shoulder and hands ones. But I dunno, I've tried it like that, and still prefer it this way, but maybe I'm overthinking it, so I could use some second opinions.

Looking forward to the comments!




Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[] Suga Avatar T![DS] :: MARA |D
byCherryRedbyDarkSacrilege
998599

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

![DS] :: DARK NI*POOF!Invisible ![DS] lEsposa EY::mai::MiaEyes~2![DS] :: MS. HOL
byDarkSacrilegebyFearcebyDarkSacrilegebyMilarabyDarkSacrilege
661359699492750

Clothes

Top1 Duplicate

[Nz] Morticia DrPIX 7" KillaZ Bl
byNeedlzbyMsPixelicious
699798

Accessories

ScalerNew Acces.Dainty Hands

Combo Scaler S90Long Leg Scaler# HD nails | dar
byScalerbySkinsbyYannomi
448709559

This looks nearly the same as the original in terms of curves. ;q Looks like you didn't need all those scalers after all.
The head is still looking a little small though. Maybe bump it up like 5%.
Great though.

A

A
93.34 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 93.34 % ( A )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A  : iMoo   : Judge          |
|          A- : Nerves : Judge          |

Note: This submission was approved early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of decline was 4.63 %.

I agree and you're missing eyelashes, it makes the eyes look odd and I wish you didn't use black hair again or this hairstyle that blends into the dress.

A-

@ Nerves:
ohhh >,> this head was made with the deliverance head maker program at random, so there are no eyelashes made to fit it x.x so far in the community, i've been the only dev who was able to use that program to make heads that fit already existing eyelashes, but I don't specialise in non-anthro faces.. hm.. not yet anyway. just never felt the need for it since there were already so many great devs good at head. I suppose I could search through kloudusts shop cause her heads usually have nice noticeable lashes on them.

As fr the hair, mh, I'm not quite sure what you mean really. The character of Morticia Addams is suppose to have dark long black hair. You mean maybe a different way to texture the black so that it would contrast more against the black dress?

ouu, just checked it in the website >,<



I guess this teaches me a good lesson in picking avatars that have no dudd poses in them x,x
I wish the pic could be retaken though... I promise I won't use avies like this again xp

Yes the contrast! That's what I meant and so sorry didnt realize that it was a cosplay of Morticia. Thought it was a random vampire woman lol.

You can request a retake for the picture in this thread. It's not always super easy to find, so I'd recommend bookmarking it for when you see outfits on the site that aren't fully loaded or something.