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Description: Where class meets edge, there is no telling where the night will take you. Hair is a bit glitch through the fur but it gives it a natural look as in real life this would happen.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Fabulous!.::mai:kyMidday
byJeethbyMilara
773612

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

NuNu Olivia::mai:kyBrows'Mai  S'EyesUnise::mai:kyMidday
bylDBbyMilarabyMilarabyMilara
6606935631512

Clothes

TopTopShoes

(ISA)Andy Gown -INaomi Fur Top BAcquainted. Heel
byisabelpaisitabyIZISbylDB
898790719

Accessories

ScalerScalerFacial JewelryFace PaintDainty HandsEarrings

Avatar Scaler 11*M* Hand Scaler Iv-Face light::mai:kyMakeup$White Nails +Go( A.} Malani Ear
byScalerbyMolebyIovvbyMilarabyAmorebyAmillieon
419499495693664686

Stunning dress and face.

I love the hair here but the color is taking away from the dress a bit much and a more natural color would help that. The earrings are gorgeous but they don't really match the dress at all. The dress is black, the earrings are cream colored and gold and the shoes are black and silver? there is a lot going on here and I find it better to let the attention be focused on the beauty of the dress. Try to never mix gold and silver either. I feel like since the shoes aren't really going to be seen that picking a suitable but more simple pair would improve the look too. I heavily feel like going more with silver accessories would improve this look more so than gold, I could be wrong but it's just from my experience it tends to work better. The dress is so amazing though and I really hope to see this improved. <3

B

Yes Ma'am, Thank you for the feedback. I am determined to improve from you constructive criticism and do my very best.
Mixing colors was me being tasteless and lazy, but I will assure to not make the same mistake twice.

Choa said it all. Very nice start though, wow. ;l

B+

Don't include avatar scalers because they don't add any benefit to the overall look besides make her appear bigger which is a personal taste.

I actually dont mind the hair here, it may look a bit unnatural color but I think the tone fits the dress and the colors go well in my opinion. Plus I like the mesh, going over the hair gives a bit of a sultry look that to me goes well with a high class/edgy attractive woman.

I also cant say the earrings dont go with this dress like Choa because to me they seem high class and I like the gold on them that really makes them pop. Normally earrings are something I dont notice very much at all because people tend to have them hidden by hair or have them blend in with the outfit, but in this case I like that they stand out. However, I do they are a bit gaudy/big but the description said she was going for edgy and classy and this with the hair makes it feel that way.

I think the hand jewelry matches the earings fine and are gold and as far as the shoes I like the design of them but wish the little chrome bracelets were gold to match the rest. I don't really think this takes much from the outfit though because the shoes are completely hidden.

My main dissatisfaction is the choice of avatar with this dress. The way the legs are parted created a slit in the dress that isn't spotted just from the screenshots. While the avatar is a nice pose, it shouldn't go with this dress because it glitches the dress out. Combine this with the fact the shoes could be better picked up and perhaps a more natural hair color could also make this look work just as good. That is why my grade went from A to A-

A-

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B  : Choa   : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo   : Judge          |
|          A- : Implex : Judge          |

Resub granted

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B  : Choa   : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo   : Judge          |
|          A- : Implex : Judge          |

Outfit Items: View
Description: Changes: Color of the hair to make it look more natural, I also changed the shoes to something simple.
I also changed the earring to a classy but edgy type. I also changed the avatar, Most avatars I used gave the dress a split so I had to go with a much simpler avatar.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Isabella [Urban ::mai:kyMidday
byFamabyMilara
773612

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Luminous Olivia::mai:kyBrows'Mai  S'EyesUnise::mai:kyMidday
bylDBbyMilarabyMilarabyMilara
6606935631512

Clothes

TopTopShoes

(ISA)Andy Gown -INaomi Fur Top B.. Beauty. Pumps
byisabelpaisitabyIZISbylDB
898790685

Accessories

ScalerFacial JewelryFace PaintDainty HandsSpice Glasses

*M* Hand Scaler Iv-Face light::mai:kyMakeup!D! Trini Nails Shark Fang Hoops
byMolebyIovvbyMilarabyDezzBanksbylDB
499495693609664

The facelight was not neccessary, but thats minor. This is perfection *_*

A

<sup>I actually liked the other hair better, but that's a personal taste of mine. Also the facelight wasn't needed as Pjush said, but this is still gorgeous.

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