January 22, 2016, 12:14 pm

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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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[C] ManEater Ava
(S) Natvus Fur F
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CherryRed
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shebyhall
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyebrows
Eyes
Head
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(S) Natvus Hair
Y{Soft Natural E
~D~ No Eyebrows
(S) Deep Eyes F/
{C} Kit Furry He
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shebyhall
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yomso
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Delure
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shebyhall
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Clockwork
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Clothes
TopShoes
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[Anry] Adsila Sl
[Anry] Adsila Bo
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Anry
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Anry
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Accessories
New Acces.Cat Ears
Fur
Fur
Tails
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ICO Dainty Hand
(S) Natvus Ears
(S) Natvus Fluff
(S) Native Chest
(S) Native Tail
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LOL
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shebyhall
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shebyhall
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shebyhall
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shebyhall
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January 22, 2016, 4:54 pm
Very cute xp Under accessorized though for the clothing she's wearing. The hands are plain, needs nails or claws, and since this is a native theme, it would be nice to see some native jewelry to go with the clothing, instead of just the clothing by themselves. The eyebrows throw me off since they're a light black, doesn't match the hair or the type of red that the brows lay on. Red is the complimentary color of green, so the teal beads on the top and boots can have alot more potential if you invest in that when picking accessories, which would also help this teal color match better with the outfit. Maybe find some teal eyes in this shade too so that the blue color in the eyes aren't so alone like this. Also would be nice to see the darker red color of the feathers tips be played out more in this outfit since the base of the red tail tuft has a dark red color like that, so maybe decide of where else you'd like to include that dark red. I've noticed you've already submitted this fur awhile ago, so I understand that it's not a good idea to edit it, but maybe you could make layerable body tatoos using this deep redcolor and overlay it on the already existing lighter red designs on the arms and legs in a design you like by using both light and red colors, I feel that would really make this outfit pop ⥠and tie in the dark red more. The shoulders are quite too wide for my liking, adding 90% reduction would be helpful. I like the tail alot, especially the bandage, it plays more into the theme, so it's totally cool. I'm not quite sure why the tail texturing is with lines though instead of the type of style like the rest of the body. Overall I really find this outfit sexay and would like to see a re-sub so that it would feel more complete, if the others agree xp
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January 22, 2016, 5:07 pm
I love the colours of this.
I would remove the chest fluff and add some accessories like a bracelet or even some more feathers for a native look. To me the eyebrows are a bit off and should be a little bit lighter to match the brown of the hair roots. Overall a really pretty outfit.
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I would remove the chest fluff and add some accessories like a bracelet or even some more feathers for a native look. To me the eyebrows are a bit off and should be a little bit lighter to match the brown of the hair roots. Overall a really pretty outfit.
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