Outfit Items: View
Description:










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

LapingBabyGirlAvSkin Choco  KIDS
byI3ar5_disablebylKids
498664

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

M' Black goth St Kids Brown EyesKids
byM0nysbyTrulybyHaruma
663499999

Clothes

TopShoes

`SAILOR. DOLL~ SKids Black MaryJ
byVimbyTinyTatorTots
689763

Accessories

Cat EarsHatsScaler1st True New H

[M] Black Neko eSailors HatCombo Scaler S90Black neko tail
byMinbyXSinfullXAngebyScalerbyWildKitsune
756675448663

This is absolutely adorable.
Sadly, the white on the outfit is flat and textureless and I wish you had gone with a version that had darker bows. There are other derives that you could have sifted through for better textures. I also would have accessorized with a bracelet or gloves or something. I also looked at the other derives for the shoes and it doesn't get much better than those if you're looking for black shoes. Idk, they could be pulled off, though looking at other meshes might be a good idea too.
I really don't want to fail this, but this the textures just aren't up to par. 8( Revamp please!

B

I'm sorry but what is a revamp?

Revamping is like, you can change anything, replace the top and bottoms and shoes. You'll be able to look for other derives for all the products, then. c: You post it as a normal submission, but link this thread in the description and tell us what you changed/fixed.

Ohhhh ok thank you!

I have to agree with iMoo, this is a cute start. Just dig for better textured products.

B