February 27, 2016, 1:10 pm
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February 28, 2016, 7:31 am
I like this aside from the pants. I really don't think they have the best texture, even for the type of "fabric" they were trying to make. I feel like they don't pair very well with the rest of the outfit either; maybe opting for jeans or something else would be better?
Much improvement in the proportions and everything too, so good job. Just remember to accessorize at least a little bit if you can help it. A necklace could be used here, for example.
The hands might be a tad bit large, but I think adding "nails" will help. They don't have to be painted, but it might look better than the default avi nails.
As much as I'd like this, I do think the issues could be fixed before it's published.
B+
Much improvement in the proportions and everything too, so good job. Just remember to accessorize at least a little bit if you can help it. A necklace could be used here, for example.
The hands might be a tad bit large, but I think adding "nails" will help. They don't have to be painted, but it might look better than the default avi nails.
As much as I'd like this, I do think the issues could be fixed before it's published.
B+
February 28, 2016, 2:15 pm
I have to agree they look more satiny than jeans like and dont fit the rest of the outfit but as for monochrome goes you did alright besides the fact that black is the easiest colour ever to match lol bbut i do hope you decide to try other colours. I have to say i would like to see the aforementioned things changed though. Also, welcome!
B+
B+
February 28, 2016, 5:20 pm
B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : iMoo       : Judge | | B+ : Nerves     : Judge | | B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge |