March 9, 2016, 9:50 am
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Sinderella
Head & Face
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1 Duplicate
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Scaler
March 9, 2016, 11:42 am
For starters, your entire outfit is a duplicate except for the shoes. I like the skirt and shoes together but I don't feel like the leather jacket matches it very well. The cat choker is completely random, and it's silver, whereas your rings are brass/gold. Your head and skin look very good, and I do like the skirt and shoes. I'd like to see a resub with a different top. Something a bit more dressy.
B+
B+
March 10, 2016, 7:37 am
You've been told before - this can't be granted a resub until you've gotten a final grade.
March 10, 2016, 9:09 am
I totally agree with Jaunty. Stealing the shoes though ... . . .. soooo pretty.
B+
B+
March 10, 2016, 9:10 am
B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Jaunty  : 1762 | | B+ : SinHaven : Judge | | B+ : 5UN5TAR : 1343 | | B+ : iiFlora : 1124 | | B+ : Nerves  : Judge | | B+ : Pjush   : Judge |
Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1410.
March 11, 2016, 3:17 am
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Description: Still Learning
Avatars & Skin
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Head & Face
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1 Duplicate
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Scaler
March 11, 2016, 6:12 am
Replacing the top with one that has a duplicate on it wasn't a good choice to make. It's one thing when one item has a duplicate, as long as it's kept different, but we frown upon multiple duplicate items in a single submission. Strongly.
At any rate, we have a situation going, here, where I feel that the shirt and skirt go well together, and the skirt and shoes go fine together (the way that the shoes don't fit the legs is bothering me a bit) but the whole outfit as one doesn't really work.
Your shoulders are also, for some reason, feeling a little bulky, here. It might well be the avatar your'e using - some of Sinderella's avi's shoulders don't scale well, for whatever reason. I'd look into fixing that.
I think this needs another shot to get it right.
B+
At any rate, we have a situation going, here, where I feel that the shirt and skirt go well together, and the skirt and shoes go fine together (the way that the shoes don't fit the legs is bothering me a bit) but the whole outfit as one doesn't really work.
Your shoulders are also, for some reason, feeling a little bulky, here. It might well be the avatar your'e using - some of Sinderella's avi's shoulders don't scale well, for whatever reason. I'd look into fixing that.
I think this needs another shot to get it right.
B+
March 11, 2016, 6:32 am
D+
69.17 %
2 judges have voted, the judge average was 69.17 % ( D+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : SinHaven : Judge | | F : Implex  : Judge |
Note: This submission was declined early because it has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com]. You must message staff to be granted a resub.
March 11, 2016, 9:41 am
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Top
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Scaler
March 12, 2016, 7:16 am
You forgot to add the emotion in the title. 
< It should be in beside, end of the title.
< It should be in beside, end of the title.March 12, 2016, 9:20 am
Editing your title. Please remember to review the rules before posting a resub.
March 12, 2016, 11:18 am
I am not sure about the top because it do not really looks classic as the skirt or boots.. but you did it great by not taking a dup shirt.
A-
A-
April 8, 2016, 10:48 am
The top and boots don't really go together here, but this is a lot better.
A-
A-