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Description: For this look I was trying out the grunge, edgy style.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

Hitta$ Just live, TatBri
byYummibyxSheylaabyHenna
774698690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 | ONYX. hairNO EYEBROWS <<~ Eyes .B. RightE.C. Dierdre Hea
byCapsulebyVICTORIAxCORLbyzaiibyRabi
768334499987

Clothes

TopTopBottomShoes

! Mini Mermaid T Bape Bomber Jac- BL Ripped Deni$ nineteen
byManillabyWildinbyIcePrincbyStalker
477699610895

Accessories

ScalerGlovesActionsActionsActionsMiscellaneous

Combo Scaler S85{LIX} Black Nail*M* Hips Resizer Waist Cincher 9Add-on Ears #2/Fighting .Leg P
byScalerbyLixybyMolebyOribyAnarchbyVenus_disable
448994499499634664

SportsNew Acces.Various Masque

<J> Der Baseballalxcext browsBARB OF WIRE
byjrdy29bySalutebySwirl_disable
399884759

Kind of redundant to have a cinched waist and waist scaler. The cinched waist wasn't needed. The barbed wire wasn't needed either; I don't see any point in it being there.
The avatar you chose to use is especially unflattering. We need to be able to see everything going on and the pose is just a mess with everything you have piled on here, imo.
Your proportions are also incorrect. Try 90 shoulders, 100 arms, and 65-70 hands.

B+

Everything has been said. I agree with iMoo.

B+

I have to agree with iMoo. I'd also like to see the red top changed, the red doesn't really go with this look, it sticks out way too much.

B+

I agree with everything that has been said. And just to add that the Fighting Bag on the leg was unnecessary too. It's just very distracting. Excited to see the resub though.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |
|          B+ : Janed       : 1417           |
|          B+ : Frightful   : Judge          |
|          B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1417.

Thank you so much to everyone who reviewed my submission, the tips given were very helpful and understandable and it will be fun to work with this outfit again! May I ask for permission to resub as a reply to this particular thread or do I have to personally message one of the qualified moderators to do so?

Of course love!!

Resub Granted

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Description: Hello, thank you so much for the resub! I had also realized while reviewing my submission the unnecessary overlap of the hip scaler and cinched waist and began by getting rid of those. Also took notes from Moo and Angel to get rid of the barbed wire and fighting bag as they were too much and made the outfit seem cluttered. I then replaced the pose with one that was more flattering in that the torso and hips stayed fairly aligned to prevent weird contortions but still gave off casual vibes. With the previous pose I had chosen for the original submission, the eyes were covered for the most part and therefore didn't require lashes. With the new pose, they are quite recognizable and do look a little small without lashes, however, I decided to keep it this way as a challenge to make the look a bit more organic and unique. It's kind of interesting in the way it looks more realistic now, the eyes look so similar to Jennifer Lawrence's, it may just be me though. The face still seemed a little plain for this style though so I added the small, silver nose ring to match the belt on the jeans. The top was switched with one that wasn't so flashy and blends with the jacket smoothly yet still has a gentle texture to it, as suggested by Frightful.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

Vigor$ Just live, TatBri
byAllurabyxSheylaabyHenna
799698690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 | ONYX. hairNO EYEBROWS <<~ Eyes .B. RightE.C. Dierdre Hea
byCapsulebyVICTORIAxCORLbyzaiibyRabi
768334499987

Clothes

TopTopBottomShoes

Coal Bape Bomber Jac- BL Ripped Deni$ nineteen
byFizbyWildinbyIcePrincbyStalker
749699610895

Accessories

ScalerGlovesSportsActionsActionsNew Acces.

Combo Scaler S90{LIX} Black Nail<J> Der Baseball Waist Cincher 9Add-on Ears #2alxcext brows
byScalerbyLixybyjrdy29byOribyAnarchbySalute
448994399499634884

Nose Ring With

Silver Septum
bySweetsVixen
554

This is amazing!!! You did a lovely job listening to the critiques given. Only thing I do wish is that you added some sort of earring which imo is pretty minor. Otherwise I like this. Nice job!

A

You did a great job listening to critiques, this is a huge improvement.

A