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Description: I wanted to create a cute black and white outfit.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

G l League Of My!F! A v e y
byGrandpabyFear
634576

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Candice Nuitq.11 K. Pierce.Emm. Crystalline KD^YOKO HEAD
byDexybyqubbyMissMayabykloudust
685939467877

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 Addams crop top Flared Skirt W.Lg.Dedee White  
byDexybyExzybyLigy
631668664

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerScalerScalerScaler

HandScalerHead Scaler 95%Legs Scaler!E  Hip Scaler 1Arm ScalerShoulder Scaler 
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyEmolicious_dibyScalerbyScaler
698419698595698448

Face PaintMiscellaneousActionscrownsNailsNose Ring With

PP| Wild EyelineS| 90% Avi ScaleP | Vital Pose PCrowns Queen WhiP. Scholar NailsPiercing 
byVictbyiSassybyPagiebyuvbyMrsPhillybyBebek
579399798581565587

While I like the outfit to some degree, I can't make myself appreciate the amount of scalers you've piled onto this. :l You've managed to knock the proportions out of the park.
The head scaler isn't needed if you're going for a bigger body type...it actually wasn't needed either way, so. The leg scaler is too much imo, even if she's meant to be big. After taking it off in shop, her legs are still thick because of that hip scaler. Leg scalers generally stretch the feet and make them look that much less appealing, too. The hand scaler could go down to 70%, they're too large atm. We don't scale arms, either, unless we feel it's super necessary. Which is next to never.
Don't forget to remove your pose packs and the avatar scaler. Avatar scalers are generally used with child submissions, otherwise, they're just an extra price you're tacking on.
The eyeliner is glitching with her eyelashes/the head. If you want winged liner, look at the makeup that's meant for the head you're using. If you need to know how, there's a tutorial on it in the rules thread.
About the outfit itself: I'm on the fence about the shoes you used. I would have personally thought to use something as simple as flats, but these aren't necessarily bad either? :u I'll let someone else decide that. Though I am certain that the crown is a random accessory. Focus on wrist/hand accessories instead.

B+

I agree with everything Moo stated here. I wanted to add that instead of you using the eyeliner accessory, I'd say go find a skin with makeup already on that way there arent any glitches unless it clashes with the eyebrows you have on, but those seem to be fine to me. As far as shoes go, I don't mind heels at all. Though, these ones specifically dont go with the outfit since the texture is PVC and nothing else on the outfit is that so... I'd say random white heels/pumps would do, or even flats. But the shoes need to be changed. Not too bad though, you're doing great!

B+

I agree with Angel, it's easier to avoid glitches with a skin with makeup, especially if you're new to layerable makeup.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |
|          B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful   : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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Description: The changes I made: I took off all the scalers, only keeping one. I also added a 70% hand scaler that was suggested. I took off my winged liner, and just changed my skin, which has a slightly longer wing. I changed the heels to a solid black pair because the other ones looked to "busy" for the outfit. I hope it's okay that it is a dup, because the other outfits, that are submitted with the same product are different than mine. After I took off the crown, I felt like the "look" was a little plain so I added the glasses, which I thought added a geeky edgy school vibe. I hope you like my adjustments.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

G l League Of MyC | Zoey - Lavis
byGrandpabyEyeCandiFem
634695

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Candice Nuitq.11 K. Pierce.Emm. Crystalline KD^YOKO HEAD
byDexybyqubbyMissMayabykloudust
685939467877

Clothes

TopBottom2 Duplicates

 Addams crop top Flared Skirt W.! All Black Plat
byDexybyExzybyNobody
631668639

Accessories

ScalerScalerActionsNerd GlassesNailsNose Ring With

Hands Scaler!E  Hip Scaler 1P | Vital Pose P[Anry] Bonnie GlP. Scholar NailsPiercing 
byScalerbyEmolicious_dibyPagiebyAnrybyMrsPhillybyBebek
698595798664565587

All-black shoes are easy to replace. For future reference, just look for similar products. Here's a few pages of the same shoes in black: [www.imvu.com]
You took this in a better direction, but you didn't add any hand or wrist accessories like I suggested. The glasses and septum are fine, but that's just the head you're thinking about... Spread accessories throughout your outfits. Don't forget to take off the pose pack, either.

A-

WOW! Great improvement!!! However, I agree with Moo on everything that's been stated. Keep it up.

A-