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Description: Sexy,Simple,Redhead,Curvy.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash AvatarTa~  Glam Angel
bySinderellabyTako
980554

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

T. Giovanna Ruby. Perfect Brow |T. No Eyebrows FT| Fantasy Blue T. Miya Head
byTakobyZephyrbyTakobyTakobyTako
658665335433971

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

[Night] Lace str Hellbilly Botto[Anry] Moha Shoe
byNightbyDexybyAnry
697598719

Accessories

EyeLashesEyeLashesScalerScalerScalerBelly Piercing

CaYzCaYz PunkLas *MH* Lashes Bot!Perfect Hand ScHead Scaler 95%. thick body scaBelly Piercing
byCaYzCaYzbyWhiteDiamondbyVioleta_disabbyScalerbyZephyrbyTisntMe
774506389419509598

Various MasqueDainty HandsNose Ring With

Face freckles^D0ll Survive!GlT. Royal Septum 
bylH20lbySexyCDollbyTako
499667532

I do not understand why did you chosen brown color for the eyebrows because your hair do not have black or red at all. I think black eyebrows would be a best choice for this.The lashes by CaYzCaYz is very old, there is a lot of lashes that is much better and new. You chose lida head so I am suggesting you to look for some lashes that is fitting for the lida head. I don't think that the freckles is needed since you dressed her up as sexy, freckles considered as cute. We usually not use the perfect body scale or head (it would looks fine if you did not scale the head) and we are not allowed to scale our hands smaller than 70%. I think it would be a best choice if you chosen a great quality for the skin to use... and also, I don't think this shirt would looks good with this look... And also I would like to see some bracelets to make her looks less of blank.



B+

I agree somewhat with Dreta's comments but mainly now, the proportions. As mentioned in your other submission, only use scalers such as shoulder (90-95%) and hands (70-75%). I agree about the eyebrows being black since it goes with the baby hairs this hair has on your forehead. I would definitely opt out for a different skin, one that isn't super light, and with a different lip color as well since the light orange tint doesn't go well here at all. Also, make sure you take full pictures of the outfit, nothing is to be cut out. The shoes match with absolutely nothing and are PVC textured, so I would change those for sure. I would also accessorize a bit different, therefore taking out the gloves and just getting regular nails, the septum is a nice touch, but needs something else to accessorize it, like rings+nails. I would like to see a resub of this very nice try though! You're doing great, keep it up.

B+

-The skin tone is too bright especially in the face area and doesn't work well here.
-Proportians are off, don't use a body scaler
use instead 90-95% shoulders and 65-70% hand scalers, you can use a head scaler depending on the head and shoulder size
-There is a lot going on in the face region, the septum feels too big and it's running into the lips.
The freckles seem pasted on and random. Lashes are outdated and also not needed.
You should black brows instead to match the hair root.
-The clothes are okay in texture
however the shoes are pvc and don't match the texture of the clothing.

B+

I agree with Angel and Mizki, but I think the freckles are fine.
You also need to ensure you're getting everything in your screenshots, feet included.

B+

Agreed with ladies above.

B+

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Dreta       : 1387           |
|          B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |
|          B+ : Mizki       : 1633           |
|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |
|          B+ : iiFlora     : 1120           |

Note: This submission was declined early;
Despite having just 2 judges, there were 5 B+ grades.

3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1380.

Resub Granted