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Description: Simple summer day party look.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

!K Sol+ base skin: ear
byKeliebyElfe
669664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

mm. Gwineth Blacs| LuaBrows KD. J* Cool Eyes#P - Prisca No L
byMissMayabyScarlingbyJahnzenbyPlaztique
6615544451097

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

[Rapb] Top LunaN. Long Skirt LiMarilyn White He
byRapbitbyNoanbyBadriyana
620609675

Accessories

NailsScalerPursesEarringsFace PaintRings

c:| Slender NailCombo Scaler S90~CS~ White Class(EARRINGS) Tiny Prisca-SimplelinLOTUS WEDDING RI
byChicClassbyScalerbyCamilaSwithbyMarthabySkyVikirnoffbyMythrelle
5984485736476911500

I think the shirt is not going along with this outfit because it do not look classy due to the pictures on the shirt since you dressed up like a classy outfit due to the skirt, heels and clutch. It was hard for me because I am not sure if the skirt is low quality but I will leave this to others. Maybe the heels is white but it is not similar to your shirt or clutch at all.I think pearl earrings and the ring do not go along because I think it looks weird to go along with in my opinion. I think your arms look too blank so I think it would be a nice to see some bracelets.

So I would like to see you to wear a different shirt and clutch but to make sure it is similar color as your heels you are wearing. I would prefer you to choose a different earrings or rings to match along with. Add some bracelets to make your arms look blank less. PS. Nice creative you got tho!

B+

I agree with Dreta. I don't mind the skirt, but the shirt doesn't fit this at all. A different white top could certainly do the job, though. c: And I do agree that the jewelry could be improved.

B+

I agree with iMoo, this is almost perfect just change a few things that were mentioned

B+

I dont mind the jewelry nor the bottoms. They both are fine to me, it's just the top that throws me off - but this almost looks perfect! Keep up the good work.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Dreta       : 1376           |
|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful   : Judge          |
|          B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1376.

Thank you for all the critiques! I see what everyone is saying and will take all suggestions into account, may I have a resub please?

Resub Granted

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Description: I listened to all of the suggestions to the best of my ability and exchanged the top, opting for this white lace one with help from Angel. The new top clipped with the original pose so I found a different one that is fairly similar. I also got rid of the ring and chose a silver bracelet along with the earrings, both of which featuring that same ivory that recurs throughout the outfit. Lastly, I exchanged the nails for some that were a more natural color since the previous ones were a pinker shade that had matched with the top.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Adria+ base skin: ear
byDrollbyElfe
773664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

mm. Gwineth Blacs| LuaBrows KD. J* Cool Eyes#P - Prisca No L
byMissMayabyScarlingbyJahnzenbyPlaztique
6615544451097

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

$ Derek ZoolandeN. Long Skirt LiMarilyn White He
byMissCbyNoanbyBadriyana
660609675

Accessories

PursesScalerEarringsBraceletsFace PaintDainty Hands

{JL Polly ClutchCombo Scaler S90Pearl Earringsselver watch andPrisca-Simplelin[CNL] Natural na
byJaeLovabyScalerbygownsbyMysbySkyVikirnoffbycanael
644448650683691614

So much better! I love it, nice job.

A

So much better
I was gonna say something about the thickness of the arms but it's not that big of a deal so never mind

A

Very much better!

A