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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

xSwiftyPop RequeC | Paige II - C
byEssaybyEyeCandiFem
773695

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|Zinser Duo BrowsOnFleek~ Eyes .B. RightDream Gyal Head 
byMrsKittybyBamahibyzaiibylDB
663719499999

Clothes

TopTopBottomShoes

$ Good Girls JacCrop Top$ Jeans  RLFringed Wedges
byEssmebyWhimsbyEssmebyWhims
664598554664

Accessories

ScalerActionsDainty HandsChokers

Hand Scaler 70% Thick Hip EnhanBlack Nails Ring$ Tattoo Choker
byScalerbyShakobibyWhimsbyEssme
419631598554

Welcome to Sedulity and I am surprised it was your first submission because it is really looks nice! I think it would looks good if you added scale for the shoulders because it looks big somehow. I don't think you do need the scale for legs. I could see the choker do have a tiny of bronze gold and you suppose not to mix with the silver.

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I agree with Dreta. A 90-95% shoulder scaler would be great here. And I'm not really fond of the shoe style here, tbh. They're too dressy for a casual outfit like this one.
And definitely vary your devs more. As much as you possibly can. Relying on Essme and Whims seems 'easy'.

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91.67 %


1 judge have voted, the judge average was 91.67 % ( A- )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : Dreta : 1376           |
|          A- : iMoo  : Judge          |

Note: This submission was approved early;
Despite having just 1 judge, the probability of decline was 9.24 %.

1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 91.67 % ( A- ) with a rating weight of 1376.

That's funny because my avi has a 95 percent shoulder scaler! but I had taken it off.
I will work on variations , thankyou so much ! <3.