Sedulity

May 1, 2016, 6:51 am

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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Caitlyn#kiss.skin
byFamabyAreola
773664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

! Evifala natura!!!**[S] No Eyeb#ivy.eyes#mimi.kiss
byJavabysynamonnbyAreolabyAreola
661345664990

Clothes

TopBottom1 Duplicate

Natasha-Ribbed|HP Knit Skirt RL!A | Minimalist 
byMothabyParakissbyAcelyn
850721776

Accessories

ScalerScalerNecklacesSpice GlassesSpice GlassesEyeLashes

Hand Scaler 65%Shoulder Scaler  - Gold Essentia Hallucinogenic.bc. Lip Gloss [3#babydoll.lash
byScalerbyScalerbyRighteousbyXiubyHotBoybyAreola
419448887669795785

Dainty Hands

$ White Nails +G
byAmore
664

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Janed

May 1, 2016, 9:47 am

I think the glasses weren't necessary, neither the necklace because it's hiden by your hair.
Also, careful with this dup, I think that actually could've been avoided.
Everything else is not bad.

A-

Purfection

May 1, 2016, 11:04 am

I'm really not liking the texture of this shirt at all. It seems to blurry. Also the shoulders are way too tiny making the head look really big. I'd want this to be fixed before it's up on the Sedulity website. Also, the necklace you have on shouldn't be used here since it's not even noticeable. Pushed back hair would've looked much better with this too, that way you're not completely covering the top. Nice try, but I'd like to see all the issues critiqued fixed.

B+

iMoo

May 2, 2016, 8:32 am

I agree with Jane about the necklace and dup, although minor. I don't have a problem with the hair as is, but I agree with Angel otherwise. And for me, it feels more like the skirt is meant to be met/covered by a top. Looks kind of odd with the gap on her stomach tbh.

B+

bum

May 2, 2016, 5:19 pm

I do agree with Janed about the glasses, necklace and dup and I do agree with Angel about the shirt and hair also I do agree with iMoo about the skirt too.

B+

iiFlora

May 2, 2016, 5:38 pm

Agreed with ladies above.

B+

Frightful

May 3, 2016, 8:19 pm

I have to agree with Angel, this is cute but it needs a little work

B+

SedulityGrader15

May 3, 2016, 8:20 pm

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B+
88.74 %

3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : JanedÂ Â Â Â Â Â  : 1418Â           |
|          B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMooÂ Â Â Â Â Â Â  : Judge          |
|          B+ : DretaÂ Â Â Â Â Â  : 1387Â           |
|          B+ : iiFloraÂ Â Â Â  : 1120Â           |
|          B+ : FrightfulÂ Â  : Judge          |

Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 89.54 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1308.

ImperialOrder

May 6, 2016, 6:23 am

Resub Granted