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Description: Swimwear with a live-laugh-love feel to it. I added a second necklace because one of either seemed to underwhelming for the look I was going for. ^^










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Peace Avi |F|Milly | Pout - L
byBishopbyHenna
997690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

-J- Aaleeyah bla!!!**[S] No Eyeb Perfect  Brows*MT* Sira2 - TruHead | Helen
byJavabysynamonnbyExzybyMissMayabyHenna
658345668471987

Clothes

Top1 Duplicate1 Duplicate

*S* Bandeau | Wh Bikini Bottoms $ Perfect Feet
bySatens0SisterbyOribyLesbians
598770475

Accessories

ScalerScalerScalerActionsBelly PiercingAnimated Magic

Foot Shoe ScalerCombo Scaler S90Head Scaler 110%Combo Scale H100Belly PiercingFull Body Light 
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyTisntMebyLisyc
419448419448598499

Dainty HandsEarringsSpice GlassesSpice GlassesNecklacesNecklaces

Cst .Gem Nails+R(Perfect Pearl S+ festival shade _Kawaii Tongue Mari NecklaceSunni Necklace
byDashingbyMarthabyCasualbyHeartagrambyWhimsbyWhims
799653576805613630

Bracelets

Sunni Bracelets
byWhims
630

You need to tone this down imo. I like the sunglasses and the Mari necklace, but after that... The accessories are mainly from Whims, and then the other half just seem unnecessary. The body light needs to go, the belly piercing needs to be gold, and the diamond earrings don't fit with any other accessory there. It's over the top. I really like the playfulness of the pose and tongue, though. That's cute.<3
All of the extra scalers aren't needed, either. I'm assuming the bottoms weren't curvy enough for you, which is fine, but they've got a duplicate anyway. And they're textureless; just a flat white. I'd look for another pair of bottoms that are curvy enough for you not to have to use so many scalers. c:
So all in all, this is a good start. It just needs some fixing.

B+

Thank you, after I posted it I realised it was very over the top and that it had some flaws, I'll improve in the future c:

I have to agree with iMoo, the accessories are way too much.

B+

I think this is cute look but it do need some changes.

B+

This looks nice but I agreed with Moo very well.

B+

B+
88.33 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : Dreta     : 1477           |
|          B+ : iiFlora   : 1124           |

Note: This submission was declined early;
Despite having just 2 judges, there were 4 B+ grades.

2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1301.

Resub Granted