May 26, 2016, 11:31 pm

Outfit Items: View
Description:
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
BadTing v2
!F! A v e y
by
Nessah
by
Fear
774
576
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
! Doris black pe
. glam brow | dr
LVB| Smoke. Side
Head Zafiro
by
Java
by
Zephyr
by
lDB
by
lH20l
662
665
485
976
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
$ Classic Crop t
High Waist Bk L
!D! # Kendall He
by
Essme
by
Exzy
by
iDezzBanks
554
668
663
Accessories
ScalerFacial Jewelry
Animated Magic
Face Paint
Dainty Hands
Chokers
Combo Scaler S85
septum - silver
Full Body Light
. venus maxima l
$ Eve Nails
x Pentagram Chok
by
Scaler
by
Elfe
by
Lisyc
by
Zephyr
by
Essme
by
M0nys
448
664
499
581
554
554


May 27, 2016, 12:10 am
Great job with this, especially the colors. My big complaint is the accessorizing. The choker was a poor choice because it's really random. You should have carried silver throughout this imo. Instead of using a silver septum, gold rings, and a black choker, make it more cohesive. The hands and shoulders are also a little too small. Try 90-95% for shoulders and 65-70% for hands. And last, but not least, don't forget to remove body/face light products. They're not needed and just add to the cost.
I'd like a resub, just to see this perfected.
B+
I'd like a resub, just to see this perfected.
B+
May 27, 2016, 3:32 pm
Agreed with Moo and also it's weird to see red toenails during you had tan nails?
B+
B+
May 27, 2016, 9:28 pm
Agree wit iMoo
Just fix scalers and accessories to perfect this
I would like to see another avatar as well since this one hides her arms and adds to the shoulders looking small
B+
Just fix scalers and accessories to perfect this
I would like to see another avatar as well since this one hides her arms and adds to the shoulders looking small
B+
May 28, 2016, 7:30 am

B+
88.33 %
2 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : iMoo     : Judge | | B+ : Dreta    : 1638 | | B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge | | B+ : iiFlora  : 1108 |
Note: This submission was declined early;
Despite having just 2 judges, there were 4 B+ grades.
2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1373.