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Description: A school uniform because.. why not? I left the nails pink because even in a perfect world, I bet nail colour wouldn't match school uniforms.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

AnnaRen
byDrollbyHenna
773690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|Deidro Black Eyebrows & Mole[MT] Sky.Soho.Ey. FKA Twigs - he
byMrsKittybyExzybyMissMayabyZephyr
663609499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 White Button-Up! Skater Skirt P School Shoes
byRovgvbyNobodybySqueak
653586636

Accessories

ScalerSpice GlassesDainty Hands

Combo Scaler S90School BagKid lil Princess
byScalerbyiMoobyMyana
448499598

She's a real cutie. My big complaints are the shoes and skirt, though. The texture/quality of the skirt is a little poor imo, and the shoes seem a little immature. Despite being 'school' type shoes, they're something I'd expect a doll or child to wear; it's not modern and it doesn't feel consistent with the rest of the outfit. There's also a lack in accessories I think could easily be fixed, and the pink nails feel awfully random. Just a few tweaks and I think this could be passable. I'd try changing the shoes to see if you could get away with the skirt.

B+

I agree with iMoo completely here, this needs a little bit of work

B+

Agree with iMoo
Personally Im also not a big fan of the head since it looks very child-like but the outfit isn't

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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Description: Actually a bit scared about this resub for some reason lol. I changed the skirt, shoes, nails and added a watch and socks. I added socks even though there were socks with the skirt because I wanted them to be higher. The shoes are the type of flats you'd typically see worn around my old school. I'm really hoping that the hair/accessory count as clothing items! Accessories are included in the Try Outfit on the site so I figured they'd count as clothing items..










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

AnnaRen
byDrollbyHenna
773690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|Deidro Black Eyebrows & Mole[MT] Sky.Soho.Ey. FKA Twigs - he
byMrsKittybyExzybyMissMayabyZephyr
663609499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 White Button-Uplaid Skater Sk~TR~ Krista 4 Fl
byRovgvbySenpaiAshbyTigerRains
653591619

Accessories

ScalerSpice GlassesDainty HandsSkins & TattooBracelets

Combo Scaler S90School Bag+ just nailsBlack Socks Klass Watch (L)
byScalerbyiMoobyCasualbyVenusbyChicKlass
448499554609597

You broke #22 rule - 2 clothing products must remain from original submission.

F

Agree with Dreta. Your best bet was to change the shoes. If you're going to keep the black socks, it might even be best to find shoes that meet them and are close-toed.

F

Remember to read the rules, you've been here long enough to know them.

F

F
50 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )

Grading Breakdown:

|          F  : Dreta     : 1644           |
|          F  : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          F  : Frightful : Judge          |

Note: This submission was declined early;
This submission has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com].
You must message staff to be granted a resub.

1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 50 % ( F ) with a rating weight of 1644.

Resub Granted

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Description: I changed the shoes, nails and hair and added a bracelet and glasses.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

AnnaRen
byDrollbyHenna
773690

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Ciarra Black Eyebrows & Mole[MT] Sky.Soho.Ey. FKA Twigs - he
byConcealersbyExzybyMissMayabyZephyr
606609499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 White Button-Up! Skater Skirt P~TR~ Krista 4 Fl
byRovgvbyNobodybyTigerRains
653586619

Accessories

ScalerSpice GlassesDainty HandsWatchesWayfers Glasse

Combo Scaler S90School Bag+ just nails# Bracelet Watch$ Nerd Glasses
byScalerbyiMoobyCasualbyBelybyNessah
448499554548646

I feel like you adding glasses here was a great idea! I like this, it's a nice improvement. Good job.

A

Agreed with Angel. The skirt is having a poor quality but you can't change it since you had to change one product but this is great!

A-