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Description: Inspired in the world of George Miller: Mad Max. And in Rust Punk Culture










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar|e| furiosa
bySinderellabyElfe
980664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

*NUFF*JESSIE GINs| LuaBrows KD. [MT] Grace - Aqu.LuLu Head
bynuffnicenessbyScarlingbyMissMayabyBeso
663554499987

Clothes

TopBottom1 Duplicate

(FG) Sexy-Punk TPVC PUNK[xx] Buckle Canv
byNovalistbyMysticDesignebyLexx
665798650

Accessories

ScalerGlovesEarringsScarvesBelly PiercingCyber Goggles

Leg Thigh Scaler!S Punk - Gloves[MT] Stradiva.Ea[MT] Amalia CollBelly PiercingBrown Goggles
byScalerbySinfullybyMissMayabyMissMayabyTisntMebyMurdrac
4196506086095981318

Edited 379 time(s). Last edit at 07/05/2016 07:10PM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.

Not a bad idea! My biggest complaint is actually the proportions; the hands and shoulders are both a bit large. Normally we use 90-95% shoulder scalers and 65-75% hand scalers.
I would have also gone with black eyebrows so they blended with the skin better, as if she painted those over, too. Because the ginger color just looks really strange popping out like that imo. And I'm not sure if I'm sold on the hair. It might just be the color against the black. And as much as I like the idea of goggles being used, the ones you have now seem a little dorky. Maybe another version would look better. Either way, I think this could use a resub to fix the proportions and eyebrows, in the very least.

B+

I see where you are going with this, it's a great idea! But as Moo mentioned, proportions and eyebrow color definitely need to be fixed up. As well as the hair that you have on since that red is way too bright and just overpowering the outfit. I'd say to find something like a maroon/black instead of the bright red/black. Also, I really wish the top was a PVC texture like the rest of the outfit, especially the scarf since it kinda just throws me off. Not sure if it would be so needed here. Or at least in a different texture if possible, since this scarf is usually used for outdoor wear/winter in my eyes, or even edgy. Just not in your case since it doesn't fit so well. Otherwise, this isn't so bad and deserves a resub cause I'd like to see what you could make out of this. c:

B+

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This breaks resub rules:

19) You can only re-submit if granted a re-submission publically by a moderator.
22) 2 clothing products must remain from original submission

In order to submit a resub your outfit must be first given a final grade by the bot and if it does not pass, a moderator must allow or decline the possibility of a resubmission.

Also, re-subs must keep 2 of the 3 original pieces of clothing (Top, Bottoms, and shoes) meaning you can only change one of these three in your resub and keep the others.

I've messaged iMoo about this thread, so please stand by.

Fixed your title.

Sorry, i dont want breaks any rule, i have problems to understand. My mother lenguaje is spanish and sometimes use googles translate to understand the post, and i understand i have to re resub. My apologies for the problems i create.

No hay problema!

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I agree with iMoo and Angel

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |
|          B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful   : Judge          |

Resub Granted