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Description: Original

I changed the skirt since there were many complaints about it and instead used this which seemed it had more texture. Seeing as how without something in her head seemed so bare, I put a hat on to make it seem more like funeral-ish or goth-ish. The hat glitches a bit with the hair but hope its not a big problem. Maybe the top doesn't have a good texture or quality but I think it matches well with the rest. I changed the brows cause the other ones were so thin, and the eyes were so light and I changed them to a more dark color. I hope I didn't completely change the original look the original submitter was going for.








Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Grace/Y/ Ophelia.
byDrollbyMairo
663499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

! Everett metals| LuaBrows KD. Selene-Mortal[SIN] Head Scale[R]Marion Head
byJavabyScarlingbyRoybySinderellabyRosee
661554399378987

Clothes

1 DuplicateBottomShoes

V' +All Odd Sold(SKIRT) Maxi Ple|m a l i c y.
byVkeibyMarthabyBatt
939590884

Accessories

RingsScalerHatsActions

Diamond Black RoHand Scaler 70%[Night] PunisherSmall Waist, Lon
byRingbyScalerbyNightbyAnarch
672419719698

Edited 286 time(s). Last edit at 07/20/2016 08:00PM by Guest_SedulityGrader15.

This is a bit too different to count as a revamp in my opinion

I think this would have been fine without the hat tbh. I think that's just kind of a random accessory, despite knowing where you were trying to take this. It doesn't look funeral-ish to me in the least since it's more of a military style hat (for imvu anyway). Somehow, the arms also feel way too thin--might be the avatar--and I don't think the small waist accessory was needed. Also, remember not to mix silver and gold. I'd consider changing the skirt again to make it more similar to the original, drop the hat, and fix the proportions.

B+

Agreed with iMoo

B+

Agree with above
I also think her head looks too big for the rest of her body, so just be really careful when fixing proportions
Also be mindful when making a resub because the dup for the shirt is really similar

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |

Resub Granted