July 23, 2016, 5:23 pm

Outfit Items: View
Description: #kids
#child
#sports
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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TF Adorable Avi
Sugar Lump
by
TheAvatarFact
by
Truly
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664
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyebrows
Eyes
Head
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Heri Blonde
No Eyebrows
Kid Sweet Brow B
Kids Black Eyes
Kid Cute Head v2
by
Truly
by
Myana
by
Myana
by
Truly
by
Myana
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663
345
664
499
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Clothes
Top1 Duplicate
1 Duplicate
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Kids Cotton Cand
Kids Moustrii Pa
Kids Moustrii Sh
by
Poletl
by
Poletl
by
Poletl
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653
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Accessories
EyeLashesEyeLashes
Scaler
Scaler
Glasses Kings
Animated Magic
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_ DOLLY LASH 1
_ DOLLY LASH 2
Combo Scaler S85
40% Avatar Scale
*Derivable [Head
Full Body Light
by
Capsule
by
Capsule
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Scaler
by
Son
by
Pittoo
by
Lisyc
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616
448
359
454
499
Hats
Actions
New Acces.
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Kids Moustrii Ha
[H] QT Ears Add-
Kids Donut on no
by
Poletl
by
Heartagram
by
lauvirtual
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July 23, 2016, 8:14 pm
You don't really seem to be listening to any critiques. You keep repeating the same mistakes. The body light needs to go, it's unneeded. The proportions are way off. Shoulders need to be 90%, arms 100%, hands 70%. The head is way too big. The feet look tiny. The eyelashes don't fit this head. The cat is unneeded. The snapback glitches with the hair. You need snapback hair to fit the snapback if you choose to keep it. As is, there are two duplicates on this outfit, and I don't see the point in a resub because you would have to change the bottoms and shoes. Not to mention the outfits are almost identical. You've also been told that the 40% avi scaler is too small. And the nose donut is random. Please read the rules and listen to your critiques.
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July 23, 2016, 9:00 pm
I agree with Fright, but this also fails a rule regarding bundles. You're short one extra product.
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