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Description: "Kawaii" cat-like female avatar containing items from various creators










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

!@ Kawaii Desu O Cupid  010
byKozuebyAko
553499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

Owl Emo AntonelaS; No Eyebrows F cute brow 0.2. SilverT: Doll Face
byewubySinpurrbyCapsulebyLuanabyPaffle
587335680444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

T-shirt Black Gox Shorties DRVYl Rapunzel Feet
byM0nysbyM0nysbyuv
609548570

Accessories

GartersScalerScalerScalerScalerEyeLashes

Black Leg PierciLeg Thigh ScalerHand Scaler 60%Combo Scaler S85Waist Scaler: 95Yl Eyelashes Bla
byTheRedBaronesbyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyAnarchbyuv
686419419448770565

Face PaintNew Acces.CollarsTailsTails

Owl FlokeKitty / Cat Glov[X] Collar KittyCat / Monster LiP| Kawaii Paw ne
byewubyM0nysbyXpicybyM0nysbyPaffle
587575497654663

This is really cute, but there are a few issues. The first, most important, is that you broke a rule. :c Top and bottoms can't be by the same creator unless submitted as a bundle.
Besides that, you should use a standing avi. When outfits are accepted and land on Sedulity's site, they need to be seen in the little windows that are given to them. I think it's best to avoid anything sitting or crouching that hides a lot of the outfit itself.
Scalers are another issue that we usually have. Proportions are kind of a big deal in Sedulity, so we push aside whatever trending scalers are being used and recommend a basic set. That's normally 90-95% shoulders, 100% arms, and 65-70% hands, with some exceptions. Of course, other scalers are allowed to be used, but only when they're needed. The leg width, waist scaler, and extra hand scaler should go.
Lastly, the outfit itself. The tail doesn't have any texture and looks like a flat gray, so it would be best to find another version that looks better. Likewise, the ears are a flat black. If you didn't have to change the top or bottoms, I would have recommended changing the wraps on her feet, but I'm sure you'll work something out that keeps them looking relevant to the rest of this. Otherwise, I think this is a cute submission. So with a little work, it could definitely be passable.

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Alright. Thank you for the advice. I'll try doing better next time with outfit, and this time I'll resubmit it as a bundle unlike this time.
I really appreciate the tip on the scalers part though, since I'm practically if one may say a "Noob" I suppose. However, I do plan on making something work with the top and bottoms themselves. Also, I'll also try my best on finding a better textured tail so that it won't appear flat out grey compared to the rest of the outfit, I didn't really notice how much the tail differentiated from the other items since I was working on it late at night.

Of course, it's up to you whether you want to make this a bundle or not. I wouldn't say noob, either...we've all had to start somewhere. It won't be long until you're earning A's on everything you submit if you take your critiques well. Good luck with your resub. c:

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50 %


1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )

Grading Breakdown:

|          F  : iMoo : Judge          |

Note: This submission was declined early because it has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com]. You must message staff to be granted a resub.

Resub Granted