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Description: SLEEK-CIVILIAN
I tried to go for a slimming vogue look but easy day-wear outfit.
The short hair to show off the buckled harness sweatshirt,
Silky flowing flares with simple but classy slip on heels.
Chrome nails to shine as bright as her highlighted makeup.
Cute pose though right?






Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ninho$ Cath : Black :
byStessybyAmore
773664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|Zagiri Black Phi Cst. Brows | DARK. eyesKD^ROBYN HEAD
byMrsKittybyBamahibyCapsulebykloudust
663719774877

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

$ Leather Sweats( Silk Flares ) ( Slips )
byAmorebyMarthabyMartha
664642609

Accessories

ActionsActionsEyeLashesEyeLashesNew Acces.Dainty Hands

Small Waist, CurAvatar Hands ResHi. Bottom lash Lashes[PIX]  Eyeliner $ Chrome Nails
byAnarchbyMrsVanessaCitbyHidinby2G3th3RbyPixologybyEssme
698499807631695576

Hello,

welcome to Sedulity. This is a good first outfit and I don't really have anything bad to say about it. I really like the pants.

A

I'd be careful while using the small waist product. It worked out okay with your Halloween submission, but with this, the top half of her body feels too small for her hips/legs. I'd drop that and opt for a shoulder scaler, and possibly up the hands a bit. It might also be the top's mesh contributing to that, but it's only more reason to pick and choose when those kinds of scaler products are okay to use.
Besides that, I'm not certain if this top really meshes well with the bottoms and shoes. They feel pretty chic and the top is intended for something a little grungier or punk imo. I'd focus on changing the top and fixing proportions.

B

I agree with everything iMoo said, although, simultaneously, I also feel that the quality of the bottoms is lacking. They're shaded awkwardly in some places and overall just look a little unusual, to me. On the one hand, I would want you to swap them out for better pants, but at the same time, I would want you to swap out the top for the reasons iMoo stated.

The lower lash accessory that you chose doesn't actually fit the head. They're noticably lower than where the lash line is. The same goes for the eyeliner, which sits down off of the upper lid. You also need to match your brows to your hair. Although they're not visible in this, it's just a good habit to get into and a detail that you don't want shoppers to notice when they try on the outfit and swap out the hair. Black hair = black brows.

I'm going to give you a resub grade, to see if you can make either pants or top work. Best of luck.

B

This is nice but I do agree with iMoo and SinHaven very well.


B

I agree with iMoo and SinHaven, they both have good points.

B

B+
87.27 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A  : Implex    : Judge          |
|          B  : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B  : SinHaven  : 1755           |
|          B  : Dreta     : 1779           |
|          B  : Frightful : Judge          |

Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 85 % ( B ) with an average rating weight of 1767.

Resub Granted